#Help with potrait

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topaz forge
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I'm drawing a character's potrait but after I did the sketch I feel something off
Any suggestion? I'll leave the reference below

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Reference

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silk smelt
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idk if its what u meant to do but the finger looks like its behind the jacket and in the reference its more behind the face

tired spade
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looks good so far! here are some things id change

  1. the bangs are at an angle so it should showthe top of the bangs. what u have rn is if it was front facing

  2. the eyes are not at the same angle as the rest of the face. the left eye is also the right shape to match the angle and the eyebrow extends out a bit too much

  3. the pinky finger is missing a joint.

  4. the arm should connect to the palm. you dont have that connecting currently. the ref is a bit blurry so i get why it was hard

  5. the avoid tangents have the right arm intersect with the left arm. what u have rn gives the illusion that the left arm is up against the face when it is not

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  1. a minor thing but the right corner of the mouth should show the perspective. your line is too straight