I drew this Comm for my friend’s OC, I wanted to know if there’s anything u think I should fix or any tips plz lmk !
#what to improve
delicate cloak
chrome junco
the shoulder looks a little weird
proud warren
you could have some darker shadows on the face. rn all my attention goes to the pants as its the darkest and takes up the most space. it takes me away from the face.
orchid flower
The hair is too green so doesn’t complement the skin tone, the connection between the collarbone and shoulder is a little harsh, i added some shading to the face cause it was a little flat, and eyelashes
Oh and lose strands to make it look less uniform
jolly shard
I think the top of the head looks a little short maybe? I dunno the way the hair is makes it seems like it's supposed to be puffy but I can imagine if you shaved their head the top of the head would be right where the top of the hair is. If that makes any sense
Also, while you do have shading, it doesn't feel as dynamic as it could be. A good way to make a piece more dimensional is to add harsh directional lighting. You suggest a directional light by adding a soft gradient over the drawing, which is a nice touch, but again it just feels like a suggestion.
I think this is really good! Just needs a little more pizzazz to pop off the page 👍
cloud pond
Woah your art style is amazing, as for advice, think pushing contrast and shadows can really easily elevate a piece! With multiply I just added shadows to a few places, and I hope it helps visualize what I’m talking about 🙂
viral ether
I think the top of the head looks a bit flat