block the body out into pieces before. your kneees dont connect to your feet in the first picture
#idk just constructive criticism
sharp copper
i saw another person in another thread call them "Structure sketches"
you sctructure out the body into shapes basically.
snow canopy
Yeah i did realise in that first pic the legs were wrong after i did the second one😭
torn schooner
One of the things i noticed in your speedraw, as the other guy said, is that you dont block in your shapes correctly. You have to divide the body into simple shapes so you can visualize the anatomy and posture correctly. Use lines too to define the angle of things and to help you with simetry in the face. You should also use references, preferrably real life images, for the different aspects of your drawing. Specially for the legs, as you are having trouble with that position.
For the shading, choose one light source and commit to it, as to decide where the light is coming from and shade based on that. Dont forget clothes are not flat, they have wrinkles and folds, and that should reflect in your drawing
About the faces, i thing the proportions could be better, tho theyre pretty cute. Id say you should make the eyes smaller as right now they seem to stick out of the face. Make them smaller, and leave a small gap between the eyes and the end of the head. And move the nose and mouth a bit up to leave space for the chin
