#I need some critique

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green saffron
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Tbh, I want to get an opinion about my recent artwork. I started to think that could be valuable for my improvement. This is wip, but it's finished at 75% (I only need to make the background and some textures in the picture).

stable blade
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  1. Why are their shadows different colours like they are in different environments?
  2. The hair is in the wrong perspective try flattening it
  3. Add a bit more form and shading to the clothes and shoulder
  4. The hair needs more fluidity it looks too clumped together