Its for art class n just looks off. Its a self portrait and the one filtered is me btw
#How do I make this portrait not look so off
frosty ginkgo
simple mortar
It could just be my eyes but to me it seems like the nose/nostrils could be a smidge wider. You could also probably bring the lips up to be closer to the nose. I think the chin height looks a little small so moving the lips up should fix that as well.
I spend a lot of time redrawing my portraits so take my advice with a grain of salt. 😂 Hopefully, someone else chimes in! 🙂 It's off to a great start. I can definitely see the likeness. Have fun!
frosty ginkgo
Thank you!!
hybrid kestrel
i agree with the person above. the jaw can be slightly wider too. the face is a little thin near the bottom.
tulip swallow
The face could be widened a bit along with the nose
And the lips could move a little tiny bit up and be a bit thicker
And the eyebrows a little more down with a bit more of an arch at the end
And I think your hair should almost cling to your face a little more
It’s so weird how after a too long of looking at a self portrait you just can’t tell what’s wrong off with it anymore so I super get it