I know its a bit chaotic so its kinda hard to read but whenever i flip the canvas it looks a bit odd, and i cant pin point where if anyone can critique me then please do! Also i cant tell if the braid looks weird on the left
#help
limpid bison
limpid bison
oh yeah I just cropped the picture the canvas wasnt that small but thanks anyways!
gloomy adder
shift the elbows out more. if you were to block in all the lines with one color youd have a blob. you wouldnt be able to make out the arms or anything. moving the arms away from the body creates negative space and more interest.