To keep it high- level, the spirit is certainly there, but it feels a bit unfocused. Unless I oversaw anything (which is totally possible, the deckbuilder you use is not exactly firendly to reviews), I didn't really see a win-con, something like [[exsanguinate]], [[rise of the dark realms]] or [[torment of hailfire]].
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Alternatively, you could go for a more value-grindy route, which you probably want to do, as that is more budget-friendly, but even then, I would look at [[living death]]
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also, you definitely should ask "how does this card help my game plan?" for your includes (looking at you, Macar, the Gold-cursed, as an example)
and finally, you barely have any interaction and card draw, both of which will be super important as the game goes on.
a couple of suggestions, you can take them or leave them, but they will give you an idea what I am talking about [[murderous rider]], feed the swarm]]
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Creature — Zombie Knight
Lifelink
When Murderous Rider dies, put it on the bottom of its owner's library.
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Swift End 
Instant — Adventure
Destroy target creature or planeswalker. You lose 2 life. (Then exile this card. You may cast the creature later from exile.)
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[[feed the swarm]]
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[[greed]], [[phyrexian arena]], [[sign in blood]]
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Enchantment
, Pay 2 life: Draw a card.
What is a sliver of one's soul compared to unimaginable wealth?
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[[braids]], [[zulaport cutthroat]], [[bastion of rememberance]]
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[[braids, arisen]]
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also, pretty sure you want to take a look at [[drivnod]]