introduction for my main villain of my story | Words Alike | Page 1

sudden turret Nov 7, 2024, 1:56 AM

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i have more

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full cosmos Nov 7, 2024, 7:23 PM

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Hmmm...
I started reading, then got caught by a comma splice.
If you don't mind, I'll do some minor edits to the ms as I read.

full cosmos Nov 7, 2024, 7:39 PM

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I'm assuming the regent is the bad guy being introduced here?

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I get the sense that something is going on (just as the MC does), but I have no evidence to worry about things, certainly not to the extent that the MC seems to be doing.

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