odd turret
Genre: Realistic Fiction
Author's Note (by me): This was supposed to be something about depression but as it spiraled back into the narrator's life it kind of...maybe still is? I don't know. Every time I read it my brain blocks it out. Maybe it's just more about the vibes. Please tell me what you think, and I NEED A TITLE! I don't have a good one yet.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1SujDkPL-dW_G3gV2TNoy6EABtdZLmXDcuC8NU6_8IZ0/edit
trail robin
I think 'Mourning Flowers' would be a good title
Also- whilst reading your story, I couldn't help but feel the emotional agony of the main character. I believe your story could move the hearts of others too, if you published it
quaint mesa
Nice little story -- very lyrical and meditative. This isn't the kind of fiction I have a lot to say about (more mood and reflection than plot, character, situation), but I wanted to let you know I read it and enjoyed it.
I think the very short chapters with quotes helps structure it well -- different scenes that take the reader through events that cast some light on situation and gave the reader a sense of both transition and time.
odd turret
Thanks so much, both of you!