#Over the Golden Sea - NA Fantasy

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brazen charm
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This is quite good, reads very smoothly. I didn't read the summary first, since I think that a piece should stand on its own and say what it has to without any prompt. I'd only suggest writing a teaser instead and placing it there. Just my thoughts.

obsidian quiver
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ohhh that's an idea, thank you!

obsidian quiver
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small update y'all, first book is now complete draft!