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split jasper Feb 25, 2026, 6:41 AM

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Hello there i am alestor. And I've recently started trying to learn voice acting and when i mean recent i mean as of this post i started yesterday.

I want to get better so that hopefully one day i can be a part time voice actor i whould love Any and all advice to improve thank you very much

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This is day two of voice acting everyday till i am a indie voice actor any feedback is appreciated

wary sky Feb 25, 2026, 2:56 PM

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This sounds great! I love the melodic tone in your voice, this is a great voice that sits right in your range. Is it your go-to?
Two little things:

Try to hit your harder consonants a bit more! Some of the words are a little slurred. If you have to slow down to hit them all, I think that's just fine.
The melodic tone is awesome, like I said, but I'd try to vary it more! A lot of your lines go "down" in pitch overtime, if that makes sense. A good example of you varying it is when you say "But this? ↗️ ". I'd see if there are lines where you can switch it up more!

split jasper Feb 25, 2026, 3:57 PM

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Alright and I'm nit sure what my go to voice is i kinda read the scrip and go based off of that

split jasper Feb 26, 2026, 2:55 PM

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This is day three of voice acting everyday till i am a indie voice actor any feedback is appreciated

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split jasper Feb 27, 2026, 8:10 AM

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This is day 4 of voice acting everyday till i am a indie voice actor any feedback is appreciated

split jasper Mar 1, 2026, 10:33 AM

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This is day 5 of voice acting everyday till i am a indie voice actor any feedback is appreciated

glossy tuskBOT Mar 1, 2026, 10:33 AM

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Oh lawdy! Umm... @split jasper.... are you aware that you are now level 2? You're getting closer to... um.....
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