Advice on Anya audition

[whole oriole]

Guys I did a Anya dub any thoughts? It was supposed to be a audition any feedback would be helpful!

[primal laurel]

your impression sounds very nice, and you have strong delivery throughout your lines. its very consistent, i like your delivery. i think for 0:21, i would have personally directed for a little more ferociousness, and make her a little more relaxed throughout her delivery (she is a kid in the end, and she focuses to only make some things important ). i can feel a little sense of straining your throat, and a tad bit of forcefulness, making anya a tiny bit unrounded as a character in some areas. does this resonate?

i dont like how i focus on these tiny microscopic details, but i think these small differences usually separates the dub from the sub. still though, i would have 100% totally picked you my dubs if i had the chance, based off of the strong choices you made. edit: well done!

[whole oriole]

Thank you so much! I think this will really help out with my audition.