#Music Discussion

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north hull
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now is also a great time to talk about how much i hate fl automation

violet fern
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finished it

hard zealot
north hull
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i am not very good at teaching

livid parrot
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@hard zealot I just made some bullshittt

hard zealot
livid parrot
hard zealot
flat sun
north hull
ashen ginkgo
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@lavish nest I tried ableton trial and

I like how it gives really high quality sounds and stockplugins, and I like how you can overview the entire project.

But it isnt for me, the UI is generally really complicated (and ugly imo), took me some getting used to even start messing around with stuff, and oh my gosh, I HATE the midi editor. Part of the reason i moved to lmms from bandlab was because of its very inconvienient midi editor and ableton has roughly the same style with like 10x more shit that pops up when i right click.

Not to mention how laggy it is

lavish nest
hard zealot
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4/4 then 7/4

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But back to 4/4

ashen ginkgo
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tryna go for that dimrain47 feel, still have a long way to go esp with sound design

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this is gonna be really tough because he used really complicated synth presets

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also mixing may be off, i lost my headphones during my vacation

north hull
hard zealot
ashen ginkgo
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@worn pawn check this channel out vro steamhappy steamhappy steamhappy

worn pawn
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Oh sweeeet

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Ima sleep soon but ill come join here tmmrw and check out the musics

lavish nest
remote cradle
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The real f777

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I think

bold thunder
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oh no way

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hes active again

north hull
molten saffron
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๐Ÿค” groovin

north hull
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more progress

lavish nest
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hey could someone give me some pointers on how to mix this so it has greater clarity, im in a situation of having so many layers i genuinely dont know what to do lmfao

potent grove
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Your sub is overpowering the kick and the kick is trying to fight for space.

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So Id suggest sidechaining and ensuring the the kick stays in control.

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This is EDM kick is everything ๐Ÿ˜

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Also the other instruments are occupying the low end giving less clarity than needed for a good low end.

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So suggestion:

Increase Kick Presence
Make low end be conformed to the kicks transient presents.
And remove unessary low end from other instruments

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Noicing on a spectral analyzer that the high end is the biggest presence in the mix, This is kinds unbalanced

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Idealy you would want to lower either by a master eq to lower so it stays level in the mix.

potent grove
# potent grove B. High End

Also noticing at 0:32 that your high end cracks, and shakes are causing destortion in the final product leading to a worse sound. Suggestion lower the high end with this.

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Finaly I would suggest making the high hats have more presents and less of the actual melodic instruments.

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Also suggestion you should experiement with hihats more to fill in the space in the high end, and to give better groove.

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So conclusion:

A. Lower the high end presence on the cracks and shake fx.
B. Increase hihat present.
C. Lower the high end on the master.
D. Fill in more space in the high end with more action in the hihats.\

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For the mids I believe you are ducking the mids too much

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I believe this is electro house and even in songs like dubstep. electro house, and dnb you should not have the mids ducked.

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Your mids and tones get completly lost, and if you were to play them on loud speakers the sound would naturaly loose alot of clarity because of it.

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Id also suggest you experiement with time based effects such as delays and reverbs to give the mids more space.

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This can be used on the lead as your lead feels very raw compared to spectral qualities of the other instruments.

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Destortion can also be used

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I am noticing with your music ludo you overdo the smiley curve and in some cases such as this adding tone and space would create a more dynamic rich sound. The fundamentals lie in the mix .

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So Conclusion:
A. Make the lead instrument form better through time-based, gain-based, or spectral-based effects such as distortion, reverb, delay. My suggestion is distortion for this case.
B. Increate the fundimental and harmonic presence in your mids for a dynamic less artificaly created sound.
C. Make the mids have as much presence as the highs and low.

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A simple example of modifying using 3 eqs to make the frequency distribution would sound like this (This is roughly the curve of what EDM music should look like)

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More changes would need to be done but it shows as simple as master eqing could do make it sound more rich and full.

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@lavish nest Hope this helps ^^ One last thing calm down, don't need to panic!!!!! BANGER WORK

north hull
# north hull

i gotta turn down that one super strong sub ๐Ÿ’€

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and filter the fuck out of one of the saws

lavish nest
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you said a lot of the same things my other friend said so yeah i have a really good direction to follow

potent grove
lavish nest
potent grove
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Ludo where is food. ME HUNGRY

lavish nest
potent grove
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Cook

potent grove
potent grove
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Not bad

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Middle End as well

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For loundess I would suggest lowering the highs a lil.

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Now the main issue with this is less of eq, levels.

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Its more of reverb and space.

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@hard zealot Is your goal to have the sound be cohesive in space or not? As in having it in the same room?

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I would add more reverb into the piano.

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And I would also add some delay for that bit lead.
Make the reverb match with the acoustic space of the Robot and Violin/Viola sound.

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Make it fill

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I dont have much issues with it apart from making it sound more like its in one room.

potent grove
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And tip

hard zealot
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I wanted to have a much more dryer sound with the piano though

potent grove
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USE CONVOLUTION REVERB FOR THIS

hard zealot
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Whats that

potent grove
hard zealot
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Whats the difference between reeverb and convolver?

hard zealot
potent grove
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Reverb using hall reverb a type of reverb that models modulation that matches the acustic space of a hall.

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Convolution uses modulation of impusles to record the reverberation of physical spaces and recreate them digitally.

hard zealot
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Interesting

potent grove
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Its in our nature to light bright present sounds.

potent grove
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Its slight but still retains the dryness

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Once again slight nudges like this help.

hard zealot
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Okay thank you! ,

potent grove
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FUCKING FULL OF LIFE

hard zealot
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My favorite part of the entire piece has got to be the intro

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Sounds like boss fight music lol

lavish nest
potent grove
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Has a similer level of energy and groove.

potent grove
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Your music has a nostalgic value to it idk why.

north hull
north hull
hard zealot
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I keep getting confused at the near end because it stays at the same chord for 3 measures

hard zealot
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It feels very weird in a sense, though it isn't too much of a problem

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Oh wait you're offline

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Other than crazy imbalance with how the cello is panned and some issues with shit trying to battle for attention at the low-mid ends i think theres some more stuff i dont know yet

north hull
north hull
ashen ginkgo
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He also scouted me :D

hard zealot
barren laurel
north hull
hard zealot
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not really mixed yet so it sounds a bit rough rn

hard zealot
north hull
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synthesis motif detected

north hull
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kinda reminds me of frums in that first section

lavish nest
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lmao synthesis

lavish nest
# hard zealot woah woah woah

that pause could defo be more experimental do not be afraid touch the noise... dont fear the noise.... . escape tonality enter the realm of timbre...

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@hard zealot lmk when u release this cuz this is straight up stuff i love listening to

ashen ginkgo
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I can't work on music

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My right ear is completely clogged

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I don't understand why :(

lavish nest
ashen ginkgo
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The mixing is gonna be terrible

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But you know what, time to harness my inner Beethoven

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Tomorrow

lavish nest
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yes

pure valley
hard zealot
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Its FL studio Speech

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TTS plugin

hard zealot
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I didn't wanna have anything else happening there because it'll blur the spectogram shit ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ

lavish nest
hard zealot
hard zealot
# hard zealot woah woah woah

I know this self glaze but i love the starting of the second half because it FEELS so phantom of the opera coded ๐Ÿฅน

ashen ginkgo
hard zealot
ashen ginkgo
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and i made a song out of it

hard zealot
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LOL

flat sun
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Yeah I agree, hence why I said "I don't think so".
But I added more sub, should be audible now I think.

violet fern
hard zealot
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panning made me confused for a sec lol

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I like it so far

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6/8 beat? Nice

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Actually nah

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Seems like 4/4 with swing

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Yeah 4/4 swing seems more likely

hard zealot
hard zealot
barren laurel
north hull
north hull
ashen ginkgo
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It ain't even Christmas yet but my new year's resolution is to save 200 dollars for FL studio

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LMMS has reached a point where it's too rigid for me if I want to expand my style

ashen ginkgo
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VERY different from my other works

ashen ginkgo
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This is how I felt

hard zealot
flat sun
hot token
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ok

hard zealot
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The arpeggio chiptune thingamajig reminds me of the moon theme from the ducktales game lol

hot token
north hull
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terraria moon theme be like

lavish nest
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Terraria is an inspiration ๐Ÿ‘€

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Moon lord theme specifically

north hull
north hull
north hull
ashen ginkgo
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so i made this start like a month ago

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i decided to extend it and see where i could take it

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do yall think i should make this a full song?

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if so any suggestions (esp sound design side)

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@lavish nest @hard zealot @north hull @wind temple

ashen ginkgo
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Merry Christmas :)

potent grove
potent grove
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Take a full listen

ashen ginkgo
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bro tis feels like what my band would play

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oh damn

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didnt expect that drop

potent grove
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This one is so beautiful to listen through

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Refrenced some old tracks in this as well

ashen ginkgo
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also damn that's really cool

ashen ginkgo
potent grove
ashen ginkgo
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it's for aqua's normal map

potent grove
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Growing up so fast ๐Ÿฅน

ashen ginkgo
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so i just made it like solemn yet fascinating trip through the cosmic cave ig

potent grove
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I like it

ashen ginkgo
potent grove
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I like it

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I like it

ashen ginkgo
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aqua asked me to change the ending

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so it's a key change

ashen ginkgo
north hull
ashen ginkgo
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but this shows that we all start somewhere

barren laurel
north hull
hard zealot
hard zealot
violet fern
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good free guitar and amp

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ui standard guitar is good too i forgot if its free

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shreddage stratus another good free guitar

hard zealot
north hull
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one does not question the ways of FL studio

barren laurel
ashen ginkgo
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personally i use metal gtx and crunck

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but whatever floats your boat ig

ashen ginkgo
ashen ginkgo
hard zealot
hard zealot
ashen ginkgo
ashen ginkgo
ashen ginkgo
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but the drop...feels underwhelming...?, how do i fix that, how do i make it grand and fast, i nailed the fast melody and everything but something feels missing ๐Ÿ˜ญ

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someone HELP, i genuinely dont understand what is missing

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@north hull @hard zealot @barren laurel @lavish nest

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rfa i need ur thoughts too

potent grove
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Want me to explain a few things about contrast and impact. And give techniques to help your current wip?

ashen ginkgo
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YES PLEASE

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I NEED IT

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@potent grove PLEASEEE

potent grove
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Give or take there are 3 main things that make EDM songs work

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One of them is contrast between section

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And adding and removing sections

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Is common.

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Imma take one of my wip goa trance projects called a World We Build to demonstrate this

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@ashen ginkgo Things are being added and taken away, and when the drop hits notice I am taking away some shit?

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Instead of adding more.

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Take a way less from the last bars of previous sections to have more impact

ashen ginkgo
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oooo yea

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ow my ears

potent grove
# ashen ginkgo

Another thing that is missing from this is the bass and low end being present.

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Bassline melodies, that are sidechained to the kick, plus a present kick might help on the drop

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You are missing that umph, and that is given on any song

ashen ginkgo
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Bassline melodies?

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So there has to be a melody on the lower end or just bass?

potent grove
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There needs actions and imput in the low end.

potent grove
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Take a look at the low end

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A banging kick, with basslines and gritty synths in the low end to keep it moving and powerful

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Try to create complementrary melodies in the low end the match to the kick, that creats movenent in the drop.

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A goal with EDM drops is that they should create movement.

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@ashen ginkgo

ashen ginkgo
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Ic

potent grove
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Up to you

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I am just giving you ideas on how to manuever.

ashen ginkgo
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I see

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I don't really know what type of synths to use on the lowend because some times they sound a bit awkward compared to my main synths

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Any idea?

potent grove
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@lavish nest Would know more of that

barren laurel
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get on some synthesizers and distort a sine wave bass

lavish nest
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RAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

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SINE TRI SUB BOOM
REESE FOR TEXTURE BOOM
SIDECHAIN GRIT BASS FOR MIDS BOOM
MAKE SURE NONE OF THEM HIT THAT H IGHS UNELSS ITS A BASS DROP

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BOOOM

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back to work

lavish nest
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sine wave and triangle wave

ashen ginkgo
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What is a sidechain grit bass

ashen ginkgo
lavish nest
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adds emphasis one the pure frequency

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and sounds reallll good

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hen sidechain grit bass is just a bass that sounds "gritty"
and has sidechain, all your bass should have sidehcian with your kick so the textures dont mud

ashen ginkgo
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Alr

barren laurel
north hull
ashen ginkgo
lavish nest
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Up to you

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This is where you get to experiment

ashen ginkgo
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now i gotta sidechain

hard zealot
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Drugs type beat

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๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ

pure valley
lavish nest
livid parrot
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@hard zealot i think im starting to make one of the wierdest melodies ive ever made

pure valley
lavish nest
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Lmao good

north hull
ashen ginkgo
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added sidechaining, cleaned up the melodies and made some improvements with the synths

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@barren laurel @potent grove @hard zealot i think it sounds better now

north hull
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attempt at figuring out a melody from a wip someone posted in another server (first 3 seconds are just me)

north hull
north hull
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it is jinos wip kyoukoThumbsUp

north hull
little gull
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yo....

ashen ginkgo
barren laurel
potent grove
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Its 2026

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On jan 16th a decade ago on 2016 I created my first song.

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So i can say Ive been composing for more than a decade after that day

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Wow man im old

little gull
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im realizing just how insane camellia is

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because my perspective changed from a regular listeners to a composers perspective

lavish nest
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Camellia sound design is insane
Camellia musicality is insane
But camellia mixing ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ™ ๐Ÿ™

livid parrot
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@hard zealot i ne ed.. music help.. (if i could send in dms cause i need to sleep soon i think)

lavish nest
lavish nest
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i did too much

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i need to get back to uni work

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videogame musician makes videogame music in 20 minutes or something

lavish nest
barren laurel
north hull
ashen ginkgo
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really cool table, found it while tryna find methods to make house music

lavish nest
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I've never seen the first 3 be called effects

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Tbf I call them transitionary material lmao

ashen ginkgo
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isnt it under 'sfx' tho

lavish nest
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Uh

ashen ginkgo
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idk

lavish nest
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Technically

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Yeah

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Idk through my education I've always seen effect as musical processes that edit a signal of an input

lavish nest
# ashen ginkgo

But yeah all this stuff is very useful for music in general

ashen ginkgo
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kind of a cool way to break it down

lavish nest
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Ye

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I've spent the last 3 years breaking down my understanding of every part of a composition lmao

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Rather than sticking to genre conventions

ashen ginkgo
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can someone break down in simple terms how the basis of house is

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i just want like a rough set of guidelines to help stick to the style, but not too specific so i have some room to experiment

lavish nest
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actually ill jus j0oin your vc

hard zealot
ashen ginkgo
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house part is not done, but i do want thoughts tho :D

i need thoughts on the other part too

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also that transition is HEAVILY WIP

somber dove
ashen ginkgo
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my house sounds corrupted pls hel[

north hull
north hull
ashen ginkgo
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@hard zealot yo

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Both of our songs ended up in a playlist of tom fulp's favourites of december

lavish nest
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insane

hard zealot
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I be flexing it LOL

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๐Ÿค‘๐Ÿค‘๐Ÿค‘๐Ÿค‘๐Ÿค‘

ashen ginkgo
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Bro I just found an extremely cool detail in dimrain47's song operation evolution

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So basically, at this part, the guitar plays a melody, and in the background of the next phrase of the guitar melody, a softer synth, like the one from surface plays the exact same melody

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This is called a call and response

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It's barely hearable probably due to poor mixing but it genuinely makes that part more climactic

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Call and responses should be done more in electronic music ngl

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They're really fun to do

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And play, since my current piece in marching band has alot of call and response

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Upon further listening, both the softer synth and the guitar play together at first

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And the synth just repeats the melody while the guitar resolves it

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Really cool

flat sun
little gull
pure valley
north hull
mild lily
somber dove
hard zealot
barren laurel
hard zealot
north hull
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ITS GIVING

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ITS GIVING STREAM PALLETTE

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YESSSSSS

north hull
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that damn background vocal ahh sound effect Trolley

wind temple
ashen ginkgo
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i love the james bond/mission impossible feel of uneasiness you created from 0:20 - 0:45

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could have been resolved better before it moves to the next ballad like section

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ok the piano at 2:20 lowkey comes out of nowhere

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What I would have done is temporarily bring back the uneasiness feeling from 0:20 with some instruments playing higher notes

wind temple
wind temple
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that part where the piano is playing realistically would just be improvised but for the sake of the task i had to actually write something down

ashen ginkgo
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In general, the song lacks cohesion

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there isnt any consistent motif or feel to pin it down

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i mean idk if it's because of the sake of the assignment

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but yea

lavish nest
lavish nest
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inverse every critique u gave is very wrong im sorry

ashen ginkgo
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sorry i suck at music lol

lavish nest
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this is insane

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if u had better sound font access this wouldve been mental

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the main issue are all production things, the composition elements are amazing

lavish nest
wind temple
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more?? i dont remember

lavish nest
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sounds about right, great work

wind temple
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holy shit thank you ๐Ÿ˜ญ

lavish nest
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the piano solo is peak i love solos lmfao

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it also does sound very improv

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serves as a great reminder to why learning music theory is important

wind temple
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also the name was a last second addition so i just referenced sbr cause i was inspired by jjba's music

lavish nest
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yeah i can hear it

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the chords are very jojo inspired

ashen ginkgo
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What arts institution are u studying in to get a b

wind temple
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also i just realised that i may have subconsciously taken inspiration from nighttheater

ashen ginkgo
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this would have been a

wind temple
ashen ginkgo
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damn who go the A

wind temple
lavish nest
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A tends to be stuff that thinks outside the box

wind temple
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no theres def a lot of talented mfs out there for sure

lavish nest
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fish did a really good composition that stuck to its theme

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my feedback on what to improve would be experimentation

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fusing stuff trying creative techniques or effects

ashen ginkgo
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i think i just got too hooked on that one part that the next part gave me whiplash idk

lavish nest
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what seperates a good composition from an amazing one is it's ability to do something new and keep u engaged

ashen ginkgo
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take every thought i have with a grain of salt cuz i have little to no music education

ashen ginkgo
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for a first composition it's amazing tho

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my first composition fuckin sucked because i didnt know what i was doing

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(i still have little to no idea on what im doing except scales and keys and chords)

wind temple
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okay so technically this is my second composition, my first one was something i made when i was 12

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but it's basically. my first cause i didnt compose anything after that until last year

ashen ginkgo
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u should do composition more

wind temple
ashen ginkgo
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goodluck

wind temple
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however im doing a business and IT double degree first and depending on how i feel later this year, i either switch to my dream composition course in 2027 or after i finish the degree

wind temple
ashen ginkgo
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idk atp

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there are so MANY options for me since im a jack of all trades basically

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so im just planning to get a raw 10 for o levels and see what to do from there

wind temple
ashen ginkgo
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might do LASALLE idk

wind temple
wind temple
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cause for me i genuinely dont know what the fuck id be doing without music; its not like im the goat at IT or anything

lavish nest
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im currently stuck in an annoying spot of music skill

wind temple
lavish nest
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๐Ÿ™

lavish nest
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like im trying to laern hi tech and youtube videos teach me nothing

wind temple
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oh yeah i need to get an actual paid subscription for ableton cause im just using the lite version right now

lavish nest
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ah

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i remember using lite

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also ableton is one time

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just when there is a huge update

wind temple
lavish nest
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yeah

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i am NOT

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paying

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500 quid

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over and over

lavish nest
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LOL

wind temple
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im assuming most people would js pick standard

lavish nest
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yeah

wind temple
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yeah i think im gonna do as much as i can with lite first so i just have proof to my parents that ill actually make good use of it

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actually so that i can prove to MYSELF that i wont just sit around and not use the software

ashen ginkgo
# wind temple cause for me i genuinely dont know what the fuck id be doing without music; its ...

for me it's the opposite, my obsession with random stuff got me here.

Back in primary school, I was very interested in taking biology with some passion and experience in robotics and coding.

In secondary school, I ended not getting into robotics club due to me missing the trial cuz my grandma died. After that, I joined the school's revered marching band with 0 musical experience whatsoever, and then I realised 'what the fuck, I like doing this???' and then I went down the rabbit hole of DAWs and everything and my interests pretty much inverted, since I also decided to choose physics instead of biology when I chose my subjects for O levels

lavish nest
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i need to be

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more focused

wind temple
ashen ginkgo
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SO many things had to line up perfectly for this, my grandma dying, the school band somehow accepting me, my music teacher teaching DAWs one day (which wasnt part of syllabus btw)

wind temple
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as for me uhhhhhh im like lowkey ass at everything except music im just thankful australia is so lenient and flexible with tertiary education

ashen ginkgo
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i wish i got into music earlier

wind temple
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how many years do you have left before you graduate

ashen ginkgo
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who knows what would have happened if i ended up doing music when i was 7

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i would have become god in music

ashen ginkgo
wind temple
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enjoy it as much as you can though at the same time

lavish nest
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btw how old are u fish

ashen ginkgo
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too many options, got LASALLE, got all the poly courses and JC

wind temple
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turn 19 this year

ashen ginkgo
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wait high school is for 18 yos in america

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oh ok

lavish nest
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alr i can show u what i did for my finals

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give me a min

ashen ginkgo
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preparing for 2 performances, crap ton of hw, my subjects being really hard cuz im one of the smart people and went for all the academically rigorous subjects

wind temple
ashen ginkgo
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i still have a big one coming up ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ and then Os

wind temple
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like lowkey whenever you get the chance just relax

lavish nest
wind temple
ashen ginkgo
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but yea, fuckin hell it's really packed

wind temple
ashen ginkgo
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chemistry, geography, physics and english hw is making that impossible for me

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I STILL HAVE HW

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after this all ends, im just gonna go get an actual music theory class or piano class

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i wanna know more so i can do better

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and help others because currently, i can do stuff myself, but for ppl wanting to try music, i cant help because I dont have the skills required really

hard zealot
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๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ’”๐Ÿ’”

hard zealot
hard zealot
# wind temple

Does the trumpet have any time to breath... ???????

I like the first section with the james bond feel inversed was talking abt, also the part with the trumpet with the drums doing ride was amazing

I liked the change to a ballad as well, I think it fits really nicely without being too out of place, though the move to the ballad should be done better rather than silence for a bit ngl

The repeat should honestly have some more changes in melody, also for the solo part the piano should be playing some chords too rather than just the right hand doing stuff, but the solo is nice overall, i like how the ensemble starts playing along with the piano, it reminds me a lot of big band solos which I assume is the feel you're trying to get

Another thing, this oddly enough really reminds me of PvZ

Overall i like it! Please get musesounds bro, it's free ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ

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Can i see the score btw? I wanna look through it and see how it sounds through musesounds

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Also there's barely any bass btw ๐Ÿ˜ญ

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Well, there is, it's just barely hearable

hard zealot
# hard zealot rate

Anyway, i lowkey feel like my recent made music is starting to sound outdated bro

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Compare ts with like, symphony of khronos ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ

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The quality difference LOL

wind temple
wind temple
# hard zealot Does the trumpet have any time to breath... ??????? I like the first section wi...

youre right about the piano solo lowkey i couldnt be bothered to put the left hand in cause i was trying to test it out myself and im rusty asf

trumpet part is pretty taxing but i specifically pushed it to a point at which i would be comfortable with anyway so its prolly fine, unless youre saying that the trumpet simply has too much presence

so uhhhh thanks! ill upload the score soon since you wanted to look at it

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hopefully that should work

hard zealot
lavish nest
lavish nest
north hull
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also how do the vocal chops sound @0:23? i just thought they would be cool to have

ashen ginkgo
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Might have a six min retro Breakcore song coming up

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I have some cool ideas

lavish nest
ashen ginkgo
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hi @hard zealot

hard zealot
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First off

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The chords at the start are really weird because the roots of the chord kinda clash with other notes because of how low it is

hard zealot
# hard zealot

The 2nd chord sounds like the root is supposed to move up, but it doesn't

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The outcome = muddy dissonance that don't really sound good

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I reccomend keep roots and fifths in lower ranges (or omit the fifths if you want), then have thirds and extensions in an octave higher

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Are you writing with horns?

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I don't know if you're using musescore or some vst but please give the poor horns time to breath...

ashen ginkgo
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sf2

hard zealot
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I tend to notice the horns seem to be focused on this low warm tone without letting it explore further into more brighter sounds

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For the start, having it fairly warm in texture is good, but when the music builds up try to have brighter textures from the horns

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To have a more fuller sound, and also to make it less cluttered on the lower ends

ashen ginkgo
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brighter texture means..?

hard zealot
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Rather than having them all in the same octave which makes the horns clash against eachother when it comes to sound

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In lower octaves, always avoid making chords there

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Because the sound will clash and it'll sound muddy

ashen ginkgo
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oh ok

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ok i made this song months ago when i was in my awkward power chord spam phase so this is the chord prog

hard zealot
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Usually root and fifth goes to C3/C4 (depending on instrument)

ashen ginkgo
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the brass notes just serve as bass

hard zealot
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Because I swear i hear F on the 2nd measure

ashen ginkgo
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this is later on (when I picked it up today)

ashen ginkgo
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is it a repitition or bar

hard zealot
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Having the low notes be close like that makes the sound muddy

ashen ginkgo
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oh my god wait it sounds much livelier now

hard zealot
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The F4 and C4 clashes with the C# and G#

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I need to sleep

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I'm off to bed, goodnight

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Let's just continue this tomorrow or when I wake up at 12 am for my meds

ashen ginkgo
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k

hard zealot
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I'll just explain further when i get home

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lavish nest
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or how do u make them sound that gritty

north hull
little gull
north hull
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rhyx my goat

wind temple
lavish nest
little gull
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roer is actually a pretty insane guy

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village of chrysanthemum sounds like 4-5 yr old camellia

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โœฆ https://twitter.com/roerdtm // https://soundcloud.com/roerdtm โœฆ

this ended up being used in a winning chart for CFD5! please check it out here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-qzlm1rs8Xg

decided to finish up an old track (made last year) and release it as a solo track. this was originally meant to be for a collective but i ended up not ...

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roer makes great music

hard zealot
little gull
somber dove
flat sun
north hull
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thine progress

north hull
barren laurel
lavish nest
hard zealot
lavish nest
somber dove
ashen ginkgo
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i figured out the song is 180 bpm but like the bassline is like throwing me off

little gull
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I sent it in general on accident

north hull
pure valley
north hull
north hull
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ughh i wanna make more interesting melodies but im so bad at that kind of thinggg

little gull
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Idek how to feel about this lol like it's defo unique

molten saffron
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LOL

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it kinda works

north hull
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nuclear bomb kick

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i can hear the vocodex on one of those basses

lavish nest
north hull
little gull
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the psyqui thing

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defo mastered minimalism

flat sun
livid parrot
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@hard zealot is there such a thing as multiple basslines

livid parrot
# hard zealot Wdym

like multiple instruments that are used for bass being played at the same time as a bassline

livid parrot
ashen ginkgo
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Hey so uh life caught up

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Just some updates

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My laptop died (again), not really upset about it, and I haven't really touched a DAW in like weeks at this point

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But, a break is about to come up for me so I will see what I can do steamhappy

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Hopefully I can finish some stuff

lavish nest
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chat i am cooking so hard rn

pls give feedback ๐Ÿ™

THIS ROUND WILL GET RED HOT

NOW GO ๐Ÿ—ฃ๏ธ ๐Ÿ”ฅ

north hull
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i need to get good at intros to songs

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and get a better piano vst

lavish nest
north hull
barren laurel
wind temple
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fuck dude my older wip stuff was hot ass

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bro ALL OF IT sucks i dont even know how to improve ts ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ i just want to use musescore for some of this but i gotta actually figure out how to use ableton

north hull
north hull
little gull
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rhyx has a disperser

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now

north hull
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i saw

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i havent gotten it yet but i dont have any disperser plugins so im def gonna get it

north hull
flat sun
wind temple
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VERY wip so feedback while appreciated is sorta redundant cause there's still so much left to do even in this section alone

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just wanted to give a sneak peek at what ive started making ๐Ÿ‘๏ธ

hard zealot
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musesounds make this sound so much BETTERR

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THATT VIOLLINN

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HOLYYYY

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can i see the score

wind temple
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oh yeah its slightly updated from the recording

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i switched the violin part to viola so i can have the violin play an octave higher in unison towards the end of this part

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cause it sounds cool and shi

wind temple
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โ€ผ๏ธ โ€ผ๏ธ โ€ผ๏ธ โ€ผ๏ธ โ€ผ๏ธ โ€ผ๏ธ โ€ผ๏ธ โ€ผ๏ธ

hard zealot
hard zealot
wind temple
hard zealot
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either layered in octaves or yk

wind temple
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yeah

hard zealot
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div. ๐Ÿค‘ is personally my favorite

hard zealot
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its latin jazz so it's gonna sound very whiplash-y

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but then the continuation is straight of eastern theory jazz

wind temple
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oh i thought it was literally caravan

wind temple
lavish nest
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If you don't like staccato I will find the nearest weapon

flat sun
ashen ginkgo
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I wish I had the music theory knowledge to do jazz

ashen ginkgo
hard zealot
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surely theres a way to notate the staccato better

wind temple
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ill figure out how to do it later

north hull
pure valley
livid parrot
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@ashen ginkgo WHY IS IT NEGATIVE ๐Ÿ˜ญ

north hull
hard zealot
north hull
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sounds like stream music

hard zealot
north hull
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definitely reminds me of a stream palette song

hard zealot
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its based off an anime i watched

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so i leaned in on the jpop sound more

north hull
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ah i can hear what you mean

hard zealot
livid parrot
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EEEEE

hard zealot
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I FINALLY FOUND SOMEONE

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WHO KNOWS HAPPY SGUAR LIFE

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LETS FUCKING

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GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

livid parrot
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its been a while since ive watched it

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mightve forgotten some stuff

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but yeah i loved it

hard zealot
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my ahh making a song based off HSL bru

livid parrot
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guiltily, the death scenes were the most memorable to me.,

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ima go rewatch it

livid parrot
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also if you dont mind,, listening to something i made recently...

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also now that im watching the intro

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yeah i can see the drums ๐Ÿ˜‚

hard zealot
hard zealot
livid parrot
hard zealot
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i noticed you're getting better at sounds and stuff

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i think you're building an ear for music, ~~its time you learn music theory iggy ~~

livid parrot
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i low kirkenuinly just locked in

hard zealot
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i'm kidding, you don't have to learn music theory, just build an ear for music and shite

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for me i really had to learn music theory

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i'm a jazz musician and composer wtf am i gonnd do

livid parrot
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i thought therr werent any wrong notes in jazz or something

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i forgort

hard zealot
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BUT, you'd still have to learn theory to at least understand what you're doing

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theory helps me understand what i'm doing, theory helps me make something coherent without it sounding like a try-hard jazz mess

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if anything knowing what chords are and what not is already learning theory

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the theory i'm mentioning here is more advanced shit that not everyone's gonna need

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just stick to learning the fundamentals which you are learning naturally just by listening and making music

livid parrot
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if chords is all i need then hell yeah

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cause um

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its like an ancient language to me

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what is maj7f8ashjr

hard zealot
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so the chord is made up of the notes 1, 3, 5, 7

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not really in the scale of the key but like

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if you go up the chord you'll get extensions

livid parrot
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yeah i kinddd of get that thing

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the keys in an octave right....??

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oh ok so wait

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@hard zealot so theres chords like Gmaj3 or something right.?? what would the g mean

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does the first note start on the g and then the 3rd note be like

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3 semitones up??

hard zealot
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G means the root note, since the keys on a keyboard are CDEFGABC

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extensions like Gmaj3, or Gmaj5 don't exist at all

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because 1, 3, 5 already exist within the chord

hard zealot
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i meant fisrt

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yeah first note starts on G, we call it the root

livid parrot
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so the number after the scale just means what key it is on the octave?

hard zealot
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if we want to get a C major chord we'd want to get the notes C-E-G

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in the keyboard we can see that C is 1, E is 3, G is 5

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the first note is C, which makes it our root
the second note is E, which is usually what tells us when a chord is major or minor
the third is G

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now in the keyboard theres CDEFGAB

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it can also be seen as
CDEFGAB
1 2 3456 7

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so we take 1, which is C, we take 3, which is E, and we take 5 which is G

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the numbers usually mean which key in the scalae

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scale*

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do note that all the chords are made up of odd numbers

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thats why extensions are listed as maj7, or maj9

livid parrot
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im kinda following

hard zealot
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now if we look here in the keyboard, you'll see

1234567 - 1234567

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but if we were to write a maj11 chord

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1234567 - 1**2(9)34(11)**567

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notice how 2 also becomes 9 and 4 becomes 11?

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9 and 11 are the same as 2 and 4

livid parrot
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ooh ok i see

hard zealot
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the notes here would be C-E-G-B-D-F

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the reason why it goes higher rather than becomes Gmaj2 is because an extension means that it goes up rather than goes down

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A Gmaj2 chord (1-2-5) is just a Gsus2, where the 3rd is moved down a step into 2

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now a Gmaj9 chord (still the same thing but 2 is an octave higher) would become 1-3-5-7-9

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that's why they're called extensions, they extend the chord rather than move the 3rd around

hard zealot
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A Gmaj11 chord is the same thing, as the 11th is the 4th but an octave higher

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it'd become 1-3-5-7-9-11

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chords like Gmaj6 CAN exist

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the notes would just be 1-3-5-6

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chords like Gmaj7b5 is just 1-3-b5-7

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a normal 7th extension chord but the 5th of the chord is lowered by a half step

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also called lowered fifth

hard zealot
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Dominant 7th chords are different from major 7 chords btw

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Dominant 7th is usually the 7th but lowered

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lowered by a half step

hard zealot
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(1-2-3-5-7)

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you'd have to write it as Gmaj7add2

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the reason why it's add2 is because you're adding the 2nd

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"add#" also works for any extension as well

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if i were to write Gmaj7add11 it indicates that I should add the 11th, but not the 9th

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the notes would be 1-3-5-7-11

livid parrot
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uhh

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in like

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g chords

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this is what his called rite>>?

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is 1 still c?

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cause thats something im confused on

hard zealot
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the root note depends on whatever note you set it as

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you could have your root note as G, as C or as any note

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depending on your root note, where the numbers are will change

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if my root note was G, this would be the keys i can mess aroudn with

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the 7th is on Gb/F# because the notes of the G major scale is G-A-B-C-D-E-F#

livid parrot
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huhm

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for what reason is it f#..

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in the g major scale

hard zealot
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notation shit

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basically, you can only use a letter ONCE

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thats why its F# instead of Gb, because G is already used here

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Gb and F# are the same note btw

livid parrot
hard zealot
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Gb is used because that'd mean theres two different Gs, and F would just be left out

livid parrot
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but what about the actual f

hard zealot
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wdym

livid parrot
hard zealot
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it won't actually be the note F, but the letter would be F

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hence F#

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the reason for F# is because of readability for people who perform

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basically a ton of notation shit that i honestly don't gaf ๐Ÿ˜ญ

livid parrot
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im so confused ๐Ÿ˜ญ

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caus like

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a is a whole step from g

hard zealot
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uh huh

livid parrot
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b is a step from a

hard zealot
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half step

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wait

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yeah B is a whole step from A

livid parrot
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but then c is a half step from b

hard zealot
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uh huh

livid parrot
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c > d whole step

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d > e whole step

hard zealot
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mhm

livid parrot
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e > f# whole step

hard zealot
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so you're asking

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?

livid parrot
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idk i think im math brained cause i thought itd follow a pattern and such

hard zealot
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it does follow a pattern

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the formula for a major scale is WHOLE WHOLE HALF WHOLE WHOLE WHOLE HALF

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WWHWWWH

livid parrot
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ahhhhh

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ookay

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ok ok ok

hard zealot
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basically you shift that around for major scales

livid parrot
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that makes things a lot clearer

hard zealot
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minor scale has a different pattern too

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WHWWHWW

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i honestly think its better you search up a video or tutorial rather than learn from me

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i kinda learned in my own way and i'm not that good of an explainer either

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๐Ÿ˜ญ

livid parrot
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so an Amaj thing would be like thiss?

hard zealot
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yes!

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thats the a maj scale

hard zealot
hard zealot
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the last note (7) is supposed to be G#

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because WWHWWWH

livid parrot
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well i think that was pretty productive for me

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I Learned Something New!

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@hard zealot thanks my snot friend

hard zealot
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tmr i'll try teaching you how to make a good melody, jazz style ๐Ÿค‘

livid parrot
hard zealot
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-# not like full blown jazz melodies and shit just the spacing, rhythm and the overall story

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a lesson i was taught while being taught jazz was that solos and melodies shouldn't always be adhd or whatever the fuck

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they always need some time to breathe, they always need something to hold on to that HITS

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melodies need story, they shouldn't just be random

hard zealot
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since free jazz doesn't conform to those rules

livid parrot
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i should probably read a book about music or something

hard zealot
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i never really read a book

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have i sent this here lah

livid parrot
hard zealot
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oh damn

livid parrot
livid parrot
livid parrot
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so fun and whimsical

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like yes

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fill my ears with those

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fun fun fun copyright free music

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Spring In My Step!

hard zealot
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i genuinely listened to candyland by tobu today

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like, actually banged my head to it

livid parrot
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omg this one

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spiderman hero tycoonb

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what if i borrow the melody from this thing for an actual song

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i love borrowing melodies from music i like

hard zealot
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i love making references

livid parrot
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ok wait im gonna go watch layla's pemiere

hard zealot
livid parrot
north hull
# north hull
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which one is better

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+40 cents (approx. A = 450hz)

wind temple
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bro i forgot about grain district i need to work on that today

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hopefully ill have progress TWO (2) to show by the end of today ๐Ÿ—ฃ

hard zealot
flat sun
north hull
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happy hardcore is weird for me to do properly cause doing a song in 90% major chords feels weird

north hull
flat sun
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I mean the drop in 1:16 sounds like it to me idk,
I'm not good with genres xd

north hull
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the lead at the end is so buns idk what i wanna fit there

ashen ginkgo
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@hard zealot @livid parrot @lavish nest

We got a new guy here, one of my irl friends who decided to take up music prod too and I have no idea how to help cuz he has very specific problems I never had, and I'm also just a horrible teacher XD so uh yeah

Meet @fiery pasture

ashen ginkgo
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Probably after this year tho

hard zealot
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it takes a bit to learn

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i think jazz can be learned pretty well/smoothly if you're very well-educated on jazz standards and somewhat actively listen to them

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because you'd be unconciously absorbing the harmonic language

lavish nest
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Depends what type of jazz tho

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Jazz is similar to "electronic music" in the way that it's not as simple as learning jazz

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Id say the first thing u wanna do is figure out wdym by learn jazz
Jazz harmony
Or jazz instrumentation
Jazz melodies
Or jazz genres

So on

hard zealot
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though that's still a general assumption, its still up to him what he wanna learns lol

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if yous need help on jazz harmony, melodies or instrumentation just hit me up

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๐Ÿค‘

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next school year i'm being taught proper jazz theory too ๐Ÿค‘

ashen ginkgo
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Just playing jazz lor, I play the trombone and it's very common in jazz

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Composing jazz would probably take a while since it's a very music theory dependent genre

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At least it looks like it

fiery pasture
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jazz

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also hi guys i hope i dont make a bad impression

ashen ginkgo
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We all started from somewhere

fiery pasture
ashen ginkgo
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Wait you're already gay

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Respond if you're a wonderful TRIA employee

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And I may slip in a message to our higher ups for a promotion

fiery pasture
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piss beam

flat sun
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why do all my projects have to look like this lellel