#"The Juggernaut's tale"

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This is the tale of our juggernaut, a rally legend who joined a team which have little to no funds to keep their rally going. How did our Juggernaut won the rally and got the first place in a beaten up Pəpik? Find out more in the story...

The story is in three parts; each part a day.
Wow mine story is first here...

(I think I may complete this story... Or maybe not... Meh! Wish me luck guys.)

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Day 1

The starting of the rally
(Commentators)
Jerry: Welcome to rally Tofuyama, Japan! Here you'll see the toughest challenges which a rally driver could ever face!
Terry: From twisting alleys to the wet tarmac! Everything is here. By saying everything, I mean everything... From our shining star D.Caprio in the Geneve, T.Little in his Extreme poperdalek, to our not so shining star S.Capolski.
Jerry: You reminded me that S.Capolski is 40 points behind the first position, and with that Pəpik which he drives, is just a little better than the Standard one. This is the last rally and he needs to earn points here if he wants his little team to win!
(In the small campus of S.Capolski's team)
Manager: What are you doing Cap! We lost yet another sponsor, we are losing money man how are you going to win? Look, this time, you have to win, or... We'll go bankrupt! Are you getting me!?
Capolski: Yeah, yeah I'm. I just hope this time this box won't let me down.
Mechanic: it already is down! The suspension got too stiff it won't compress at all! There's no chance cap. I'm a mechanic, I'll get job somewhere else, how would you sustain yourself?
Capolski: I'll manage. (Gets in the Pəpik and drives slowly to the starting)
Jerry: Oh look! Here's S.Capolski! I hope he may do good this time...
Countdown starts: 5,4,3,2,1, Go!
Cap slams the accelerator and then drives off from the starting point. His Co-driver is reading pacenotes precisely and Cap acts accordingly
Terry: Look how fast he's going! These narrow streets won't forgive those drivers.
Cap brakes and steers hard and sees spectators beside the road. Only a few cheer for him. He pulls the handbrake and turns into the sharp turn, taking him downhill to the finish line.
Jerry: Not bad... 4 minutes is a decent time. He comes 5th
Cap enters the campus
Manager: 5th? Capolski you won't get much points if you did like that. I bought better quality brakes and shaft. It may help you but I'm concerned about our money tho...

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An our later

Capolski: Okay, if the car is ready, shall I advance manager?
Manager: Okay, shall you do so, but this time you gotta do better, okay?
Capolski: Sure!
He hops into his pəpik and reaches the starting point
Jerry: D.Caprio just destroyed the previous stage, and I think he would do it again with its beast car!
Terry: T.Little is also doing great, in fact every driver did good in the last stage, including Cap. Let's see what happens next.
Jerry: speaking of cap: There's him! S.Capolski!
(Light becomes green)
Capolski: Rock and roll baby!
And Cap's car comes into motion. His co-driver reads the pacenotes with real pace, and to catch that pace, Cap speeds up, passing from the crowd collected on the side of road. People Shouts and cheers him. Cap confidently drifts into the wet roads and crosses the line
Jerry: Never saw S.Capolski so active and cool. He came third with the time of only 3:20!
Terry: Just behind Caprio and Little!? That's crazy! That European Econobox just showed how capable it is!
(In the campus)
Manager: (Hugging Cap) Cap! You just did so nice! I'm sure if you did like this again, our sponsors may return!
Capolski: Please don't call me Cap! And thank you for the compliment, the new parts really helped. Now I need rest. Call the mechanics, they gotta prepare for the night Stage.
(A mechanic runs towards the manager)
Mechanic: (Whispering) Sir! The brakes you bought just gets faulty sometimes for unknown reasons! They can jam anytime!
Manager: What! This can't be true! Replace them with the old ones now!
Mechanic: Can't... We sold them at your saying...
Manager: Sh*t! I just want to live a peaceful life! Guess God want it to go the different way...

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To be continued...

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||If you're confused, lemme tell you that "Jerry" and "Terry" are commentators||

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Day 2

The day of horror
Jerry: It's 1 o'clock in Japan and our drivers, their team and our viewers are full of energy, right Terry?
Terry: (snoring)
(Jerry crushes his legs)
Terry: YAAAAAAAAAAA!!!
Jerry: Oh my! He's full of energy! Man how much coffee you drank?
Terry: I would explain it beautifully to you but first let's see what our competitors are doing. Look at those cars Jerry!
Jerry: I see their preparation is complete. D.Caprio's Geneve is just Sparkling with that many lights. They are gonna face no problem in night Stage at all!
Terry: Look at T.Little's Poperdalek! The headlights are so bright it's gonna become day. Where Cap?
(Outside the campus)
Manager: This is all we have. Three halogen bulbs fitted on this frame. Hope it helps you.
Capolski: I just hope they even lit...
Capolski gets into the car and heads towards the starting point. He is a bit anxious today.
Co-driver: 5,4,3,2,1,Go! (Starts reading the pacenotes)
Jerry: Here goes S.Capolski. As as I know, he drives very good at night. The only problem is his Car, the Pəpik which is not built for rally racing.
Terry: His car is also not tuned very well. I know he won't get much help from this setup. Let's see what happens...
Capolski leaves behind the town and enters the rice farms. He is driving on a cheap tarmac road which is surrounded by the rice crops. Although Capolski can't see much in the dark, he is facing no problems in driving. "3 left 200" the co-driver reads out. Capolski was driving at 89 km/h as the road was straight. He slam the brakes, but they get faulty. Being in rush, he pulls the handbrake as hard he could, but it was too late...
The car drifts off the road, into the fields, and then bam! The car slides into a only tree visible there. The side where Cap was sitting smashes into the tree. Only safety feature the car had was the roll cage made of aluminium. The helicopter from above saw all this and it was broadcasting in the TV. His car was barely visible in the dark.

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The recovery van arrives, along with the ambulance. The car's side profile was in totally bad condition, the roll cage didn't helped much. The co-driver was found unharmed, while Capolski got arm and his right leg injured, and his head was mildly bleeding. After bandages and dressing, Capolski was lying on the hospital bed. Manager came towards him sprinting.
Manager: Oh God what just happened!? Are you fine Cap? You just retire this rally.
Capolski: (slowly) I won't
Manager: I don't care if we won or lost! If I forced you to continue and something else happened to you, what would I do? Does God would appreciate this? F*ck money, you retire now!
Capolski: (Getting up from the bed) What's my score?
Manager: Hey! Keep lying in the bed! You haven't recovered yet.
Capolski: (Angrily with raised voice) What's my score?
Manager: (Silently) You-you are...2-20 points behind...
Capolski walks out of the room
Manager: Where are you going Cap?
Capolski: Manager, you messed up, it's time for me to clean this mess.
Capolski leaves the room

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Day 3

The surprise ending
Jerry: That was a horrible carsh tonight. S.Capolski's car has been totalled. He must have retired from this rally.
Terry: He have no other options than quitting, if he didn't, I will call him madman!
(Meanwhile at the campus)
Mechanic: Cap, you returned but there's no chance you could win. Just retire and go home, we ain't winning.
Capolski: I ain't going anywhere! I will rally. I know we could do it.
Manager: (coming from behind) How are you gonna do it? We have already lost? Are you gonna do a magic trick or something?
Capolski: Remember When my dad was in rally?
Manager: Ah yeah! He was a true legend, he never lost hope and always gave his best... God he rest in peace.
Capolski: remember his accident?
Manager: Ah I remember, he had a similar accident too like you ha– wait... Aren't you thinking that I'm thinking?
Capolski: Definitely! We can do the same thing!
Manager: Man that was 1968! Everyone fixed the car that way. We are in the end of the second last decade of 20th century!
Capolski: I don't care, just do it that way; look you gotta do it for me, my dad, you and your team, trust me...
Manager: Ahhhhhhh fine...
(Mechanics sent to work)
Manager: It won't fix until the another stage.
Capolski: Who wanna participate in that stage anyways... I'm going for the Super special, it's 50 point stage man I can win!
Manager: You are currently 20 points behind chap, you ain't gonna make the change.
Capolski: I will
(Sounds of hammers and chisels)
(At the time of super special stage)
Jerry: Welcome to the Super special stage! The 50 pointers! Look at that stage! Look at those fans! Look at those cars! Uhhhh this gotta be so exciting Terry!
Terry: Damn these cars and the drivers look ready to rock! Look at D.Caprio's Geneve, it's so well tuned. T.Little's Poperdalek looks like a Mythical beast today the way it's tuned. And then there's... Wait... CAPOLSKI!? WHAT IS HE DOING HERE!?

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Jerry: He is still in the bandages and his car is not properly fixed! How he gonna win this stage!?
(In the pəpik)
Co-driver: Bruv, Watcha think ya gunna do? Dis box is trashed and so is yo' health. Ya still think we gonna do it?
Capolski: Just read the notes correctly and we are all fine.
(Capolski's car move to the starting point. D.Caprio's car is beside his on the another track. Jerry and Terry are doing the countdown...)
Jerry & Terry: GO!!!
At the go, both car roars and lean ahead. Everyone is amused to see the competitiveness of S.Capolski today. He shifts and the car zooms between the ramps placed just at the sides of road. The Geneve leaps on the ramps. Everyone claps. Capolski acts so precisely that he wastes no time in the corners, he even saved enough time to reach the checkpoint before D.Caprio. Fearing the loss of position, he shifts and tries to cut corners like him, but the car's bumper crashes into the walls. Capolski's car starts to leak, and a part falls from the car ad the car was already in bad condition. But he manages to leave behind D.Caprio, jumps from the ramp on which he jumped, swifts smoothly on the tracks and finishes his run with an extremely fast time of 2 minutes!
D.Caprio: Ah Sh*tto, This German car is no good than the classics of Italia. Non riesco a smettere di piangere!
Capolski: YEAH BABY WOOHOO!!!
Manager: Just like his dad, he truly is a rally legend, a juggernaut!

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