TYPO & GRAMMAR STUFF GOES HERE

[toxic raptor]

Have you seen a typo or grammar mistake in the game? please report it here ⬇️ keeping similar reports in a single thread makes devs lives easier

[finite mango]

"Adamant" is used awkwardly here. If he was adamant, he would not be a "little" adamant, which means refusing to be persuaded. "Hesitant" would work better in this case, especially given the way Benny speaks. Benny never does anything adamantly.

"Hater" should be in double quotes, not single quotes and the period should be inside the quotes. "Hater." There should be a comma after "hurt," too.

Again, dialogue within a quote should be single-quoted. Note the very beginning with a double quote and single quote.

"'We took you in. Partook in white wine as equals around my table. This is how you repay me?' The ronin did not care." -Kobayashi

"Summer" should be in double quotes, not single quotes. Single quotes should appear only within double quotes. Also, it should be "me," not "I" when Paige is referring to herself singing.

"Understudy" should be in double quotes, not single quotes. Single quotes should appear only within double quotes.

There should be single quotes when the speaker is speaking versus the description of what the speaker is doing. Note the very beginning with both the double and single quotes back to back.

"'You come for gold?' He gestures toward the drawer. 'Take it then. Take all of it.' A futile act of desperation." -Kobayashi

"Faded" should be in double quotes, not single quotes. Single quotes should appear only within double quotes.

"Core" values should be in double quotes, not single quotes. Single quotes should only appear within double quotes.

[outer citrus]

Hmmmm
Quotes are not an issue imo

It's very location based

Like british english or other

A lot of people use british quotation methods while others use US etc.

[toxic raptor]

I think they used adamant to make it look like benny was trying to use fancy words

[toxic raptor]

there is a chance devs chose ' instead of " to make the data as small as possible but I'm not 100% sure

are you a teacher? or someone who works on grammar / language stuff?

[finite mango]

English major.

[finite mango]

This is not a British versus US issue.

It is fine. I will stop correcting punctuation if you so desire.

[toxic raptor]

nah feel free to continue
just keep the corrections here in this thread thing

you're from US?

[toxic raptor]

cool

[finite mango]

Yes, US.

[toxic raptor]

nice

feel free to bring up more corrections (specially the ones involving this > ,

[finite mango]

The comma? Sure.

[toxic raptor]

yah

[outer citrus]

That's not the point, I think you misunderstood my intent. I'm merely sharing my info about something, which may be contradictory to wat somebody else mentioned. Please feel free to share the suggestions/corrections/bugs as they are very helpful, don't be offended by other comments

[toxic raptor]

aruhi doesnt have a mean bone in her body

[neon saddle]

is there really a comma after hurt?

i fixed all the other grammatical errors!

if too is at the end of the sentence i think its not an error to not have the comma. and cuz the sentence is short, i feel like it's better without?

let me know if im wrong btw

[buoyant willow]

I’m quite sure “-and I” is grammatically correct? me is usually used when it’s “me and-” and not often “-and me”

[finite mango]

If "too" is at the end of the sentence, there always should be a comma before it, even a super short sentence like "Me, too."

[finite mango]

It depends on the context. The way you can tell is if you shorten the sentence to refer to yourself only.

If you hear Scarlett and I sing

If you hear I sing

If you hear me sing

If you hear Scarlett and me sing

The first two are wrong, the second two are correct.

If you change the subject from "you" to "I," then you get:
If I sing -right
If Scarlett and I sing -right
If Scarlett and me sing -wrong
If me sing -wrong

[finite mango]

Wonderful! Thank you! ☺️

[buoyant willow]

ohhh wait, I get it now
thank you for explaining it to me

[finite mango]

The comma always goes before the "but" in this kind of sentence.

The quotes are unnecessary in this sentence. However, if you really want quotes, they should be double quotes and the comma should go inside the quotes. "run-down,"

BTW, I think the prevalence of incorrect use of single quotes seen today is due to carryover of news article headlines having single quotes. Here you can see single quotes in the headline and double quotes in the body. News article headlines are an exception. Another exception is single quotes within double quotes. In most other cases, you should use double quotes.

[robust tinsel]

Please move discussions that are not reporting bugs to #off-topic-chat

[finite mango]

Comma before "but."

Comma before and after "but."

[finite mango]

Comma before "but."

Period after "new." Comma before "but."

[finite mango]

I believe Tsuki uses British English for spelling, so "neighbours" should be spelled with a "u."

Comma after "me."

Comma after "Yori."

Comma after "me."

[finite mango]

Comma after "witty."

Comma after "hey."

Comma after "crazy."

Comma before and after "but."

[finite mango]

Comma before "too."

“‘We took you in. Partook in white wine as equals around my table. This is how you repay me?’ The ronin did not care.”

“‘Sit,’ commands the master,

Sirens’ Pool
pool of the Sirens

"a little overkill"

[outer citrus]

Shouldn't it be "village is like at this time of the night"?

[outer citrus]

So basically all the single quotes should be double quotes, that's wat u mean, right?

Unless that's a dialogue?

Phrases --> single
Dialogues --> double
That?

[finite mango]

"At" is unnecessary.

[finite mango]

Mostly, yes.

[daring shale]

Extra “u” in “curiosity”. Also, I saw another typo in Rosemary’s wreath quest yesterday, on the dialogue, but I didn’t take a screenshot. You might want to go over that one again. Now I can’t remember if it was before or after talking to Paige, nor if the typo was with Paige, but I think it’ll be easy for you to find.

[daring shale]

Should be “and put”.

[daring shale]

“Everywhere” is missing the first “r”.

[daring shale]

Should be “she’d get”.

Or “she’d be”?

[daring shale]

“Especially”

[daring shale]

Should be “Manages to BRING back.”

[daring shale]

Repellent

I’m

[daring shale]

Is it missing a “were” between cookies and icing?

Inseparable

[daring shale]

Missing a “be”.

[daring shale]

Double “something”.

[daring shale]

Get “out” your notebook

Someone

[finite mango]

rebuilding yourself
adolescent

[daring shale]

Punctuation

[finite mango]

she was funny

head and that
them,

Tsuki... I'm not too sad Mommy isn't... umm... around anymore, but sometimes people get sad when she gets brought up.

around,
dark, yeah?

C'mon,
throat's

that, too, because

[finite mango]

Village

late,

bed,

Yeah, okay, Mr. Ramen Guy!

we turtles
its

store,

Yeah,

There's a cool

"unexperienced" ||Yes, I know you mean "inexperienced," but it still should be in double quotes, not single.||

know what to
Whoa.

pain in the

[finite mango]

inseparable

gotten

think, "That's a nice song."

say, "Time heals all wounds."

bark,
"hater."
hurt,
Oh,

[finite mango]

somethin'

for-formally

They're soulful

its

[finite mango]

Day
give them

old,

drinks,
reconsider,

cream,

heart,
want to

granted,

youth,

winter, but

[finite mango]

Well, it's

budget."

subtle,

labour ||British English||

[finite mango]

digitally,

[finite mango]

Ugh,

"gaudy!"

could hang

[neon saddle]

this one is correct, it's slang