Faction: Holy Crusade

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Current Units: Paladin
Inquisitor
Deacons
Foot-Men

Holy Crusade Passive Ability: Passive Slow Healing and Increase Damage Against Undead

Current Completed Unit:
Unit: The Paladin

Movement Speed: Slower than a Juggerknight and Faster than a Giant
This Doubles After the Shield Breaks

Training Time: 24 Seconds

Cost: 650 Gold
250 Diamonds

HP: Paladin: 550
Great Shield: 120

Weapon: Paladin's Holy Halberd

Offhand: Paladin's Holy Great Shield

Attack: Starts with Thrust Attack with the Speed of 2.1 and the damage of 16, Then a second Thrust with the same stats, and Lastly a Swing with a speed of 8.6 and damage of 35 that has an AOE effect of 4.
The Speed is 0.7 times faster after the shield breaks

Ability: Paladin's Shield/Healing Aura - Casts a Aura around the Paladin that Both Shields the Paladin and Nearby Allies from Arrows and Gradually Heals Allies, Loses this Ability after His Great Shield takes significant damage and breaks, a weaker form is used after via the Halberd

            Paladin's Great shield Smash - The Paladin Smashes the Ground with his Great Shield Knocking Enemies Both Down and Back, With an AOE that effects 5-6 enemy units, This ability is lost after the Great Shield takes significant damage and breaks

            Paladin's Protection - The Great Shield takes Damage first then breaks, after it breaks the Paladin will take direct damage, Lightning and Ice Gets past his Great Shield's Block, This Ability is lost after the Great Shield takes significant damage and breaks.

Top Left: Inquisitor
Bottom Left: Deacons
Bottom Right: Paladin
Top Right: Foot-Men

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Deacons are Healers
Foot-Men are Swordwraiths of the Holy Crusade
Paladins be Tanky unit
Inquisitors is the Fast Medium Range Guys

Weapons and Items:

Paladin: Holy Halberd & Greatshield

Foot-Men: Shortsword

Deacons: Deacon's Holy Tome & Deacon's Holy Staff

Inquisitors: Throwing Knives & Naginata

@teal compass I added the Paladin to a New Faction and Added 3 new Units who at the moment have no Stats

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Deacons
Damage: N/A:
Pop: Unarmed Deacon: 2, Tome Deacon: 4, Staff Deacon: 4, Total: 10
120 HP Each
Cost: 125 Gold and 50 Crystals
Training Time: 25 seconds
Speed: Meric speed
Range: Medium Range
Healing Speed: every 12 seconds
ABILITIES:

• Spawns in Groups of 3 (Only Two Deacon Groups at a time)

• Heal - Heals 25 HP of Allies of 4 units (The Unarmed Deacon heals 1, and both the Staff Deacon and the Tome Deacon heal 2 each)
  Items: Holy Tome and Holy Staff

Footmen
Damage: 25
Pop: 5
125 HP
Cost: 125 Gold and 25 Crystals
Training Time: 17 Seconds
Speed: Swordwrath Speed
Range: Close
Attack Rate: Same as Swordwrath
ABILITIES:

• N/A
  Items: Shortsword

Inquisitors:

• HP: 150

• Damage: 20 (per knife throw), 35 (Naginata)

• Attack Type(s): Ranged (Throwing Knives), Melee (Naginata)

• Attack speed: 1.5 (knife throw), 2.0 (Naginata)

• Movement Speed: Equivalent to a Swordwraith (After Final Burst it's Equivalent to a Shadowraith)

• Gold Cost: 500

• Diamond Cost: 250

• Training time: 20 seconds

• Pop: 7

• Ability(s): Cleanse - 1: Removes Negative effects from Allies and Self
  Final Burst: When a Inquisitor reaches 30% Health it gains increased damage and speed

• Passive Ability(s): Dodge: The Inquisitor can Dodge Arrows

• Weapons or Items: Throwing Knives, Naginata

@teal compass I finished the other units stats, I tried to make them more balanced, can you give me both good and bad criticism?

[teal compass]

I'll check them later, I have to sleep rn

[forest wagon]

Ok, makes sense since I don't know your time zone, so have a Goodnight!

Can y'all critique my ideas? I want both good and bad criticism. By the way The Paladin I work too much on (And might need to be balanced tbh)
The other three I just finished and I tried to make them balanced. Also I don't know who to exactly ask to criticize my ideas...

[gray drift]

@forest wagon
Let's take a look-see here... I'd think nerf the Inquisitor's dodge, for one. A shadowrath is more expensive, and by a long shot. And I'd place the inquisitor on a level similar to them. Footmen seem like a tankier, heavier hitting swordwrath. The cost is too low for them, or the stats are too high. Adjusting either would be an improvement.

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The Inquisitor's Dodge affects only 20% Arrows (The Dodge can Dodge 45% Arrows and 15% Melee Attacks when the Inquisitor reaches 30% Health or Below) The Inquisitors now cost 450 Gold and 120 Diamonds

The Foot-Men now cost 340 Gold and 30 Diamonds.

Did this Balance them more? What do you think, also was the Deacons Balanced? (I didn't put this but the Deacons act slightly like Generals but aren't, They Spawn in Groups of 3 and you can only have 2 Deacons at one time [ Since they are in groups of Threes that means 6 Deacons at once] Might make the Deacons more expensive) Also any criticism on the Paladin?

[gray drift]

The paladin is probably the one of the most unique units I've seen so far. It seems fairly priced, too. If the Deacons are spawning in sets of three, you may need to make the train time last longer if these are the stats per each individual unit.

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Yuck, gold and crystal costs that aren't multiples of 25.
Yuck, health values that aren't multiples of 5
Also it's crystal, not diamonds.
Other than that it seems super good.

Why do Inquisitors have 8 pop?!

[forest wagon]

Originally it was going to have more Attack damage but I never lowered the Pop....

[forest wagon]

Wasn't paying attention to the Diamonds that are actually called Crystals...

[upbeat plinth]

Yeah you should probably lower that to like, 3 or something

Wait holy crap the Inquisitor has 17.5 melee DPS for only 200 Gold and 75 Crystals

[forest wagon]

Does that mean I should change the cost of it?

[upbeat plinth]

Or lower the damage, your decision.

But seriously Unit costs need to be multiples of 25

[forest wagon]

Ok.

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How about 500 Gold and 250 Crystals?

I'm not sure if this is too high.

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Wait what are the movement speed values?

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I put 6, but I might say Shadowraith speed (Times that by 1.5 if the Inquisitor is at or under 30% health)

[upbeat plinth]

Yeah just a number for speed won't make any sense, I'd recommend using reference points.

[forest wagon]

Sooo maybe slower than a Shadowraith is a better Idea because of the speed boost after low HP.. And The Holy Crusade Passive is to deal double damage to undead

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Yeah I'd say that's much better

[forest wagon]

I don't really like the Art for the Paladin I did so I plan to redraw it... Might keep the Base idea but make the armor more chunkier in size

[forest wagon]

Ok, I say the Inquisitors have a speed that's three fourths of the Shadowraith, but after reaching or going under 30% HP it would be one half more than the Shadowraith

[teal compass]

Footmen HP should be decreased to 100-125 and mana cost should be increased to 25. And probably gold cost too to 125

[upbeat plinth]

Too confusing.
Base Speed: Swordwrath
Last Rush Speed: Shadowrath

[forest wagon]

That's actually a better way of describing it..

[teal compass]

Inquisitor should be 6-7 pop and cost should be increased by a lot

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Real? They only have 150 HP tho.

Oh wait

Yeah they're already fixing that.

It's all taken care of

[teal compass]

What's 5 and 6 movement speed?

[upbeat plinth]

6 is good

[forest wagon]

It was! I decided to make it cost 500 Gold and 250 Crystal
The movement Speed now is Swordwraith speed before reaching 30% HP and Shadowraith speed after

[teal compass]

So 6 movement speed is swordwrath speed?

[upbeat plinth]

You should probably edit the message.

[forest wagon]

I am

[upbeat plinth]

Also why didn't you put all the Unit stats in the main message?

[teal compass]

How many units can the deacons heal at once?

[forest wagon]

I made the stats for the Footmen, Deacons, and Inquisitors after the initial message. I could've edited the message and add the stats to it but I find it easier to edit stats of different units if it's separate messages

[upbeat plinth]

I see.

You could probably formulate their stats better and in a more organized fashion. I can give you a template if you want?

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Hmmm... The Staff Deacon can Heal 2, The Unarmed Deacon can Heal 1, and The Tome Deacon can Heal 2: so 4 altogether (Still working on the Deacons because it's pretty unbalanced and non-updated!)
P.S. I forgot to change the fact that Deacons spawn in Groups of Three, and I need to edit the Training speed

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Sure, I'm not the best at organizing so maybe it will help

[teal compass]

HUH???

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UNIT NAME:
DAMAGE:
HEALTH:
COST:
POPULATION:
TRAIN TIME:
SPEED:
RANGE:
ATTACK RATE:
PASSIVE ABILITIES:

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ABILITIES:

• Ba
• Ba

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The Picture I drew of the Deacons is actually how they are supposed to spawn! The Deacons spawn in Groups of Three, One wielding nothing, one using an staff, and one with a Magic Tome

Need to update the info on them

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My brother in christ did you make a group of 3 Units only cost 120 Gold and 35 Crystal (Should be rounded to 125 and 25 respectively)

[teal compass]

Do each of them take up 5 pop?

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When I was fixing Their stats I actually changed it before I saw your message

[forest wagon]

No they aren't all 5 pop....how about I change the Pop to 12 all together? Or do I go higher?

[teal compass]

They should all have different pops

[forest wagon]

I made the Unarmed Deacon have a pop of 3 and both the Staff Deacon and Tome Deacon have Pop of 4 each because they both have equal abilities. Since all three Deacons spawn together it is a Total Pop of 11

[teal compass]

3 pop is way too much for unarmed deacon

[forest wagon]

He still heals.. and they are support units

But it's understandable how about 2 or 1

[teal compass]

2

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Contemplating breaking the fan-ideas-sw3 rules just to make a template that people can use...

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I edited your template you gave me by adding weapons and pop as Categories, and for the Deacons I changed attack Speed to Healing speed

[upbeat plinth]

Healing is an ability, so you could've put it there with a cooldown.

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Yeah I forgor the Pop...

[forest wagon]

Oh yeah..

[upbeat plinth]

I like your ideas tho, feels decently Stick War-y

[forest wagon]

Thank you! This is my second idea I made (The First Idea was included in this one which is the Paladin who was in a Different suggestion page I made)

Also I edited both the Deacons and the Footmen Stats

[upbeat plinth]

Your drawings are also epik, however I feel like the deacons could definitely just be a single Unit.

[forest wagon]

Yeah, could've given the Deacons both items at once...

Also I have a few more unit drawings I didn't decide to add in any suggestions which are the Standard Bearer, The Corsair, The Harpoon Gunner and The Kraken Rider (Also a few more I forgot the names of)

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Kraken Rider?

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Yeah

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It wasn't the best drawing.. do you want to see the drawings? Might make the Unit Suggestions of them at an later date

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Like, the mythical ocean beast?

The squid one?

And it's small enough to ride?

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Yeah

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Didn't make it HUGE and It's due for a Redraw because I had no concepts to look at when drawing, and the "Kraken" Looks more like a Giant Squid mixed with a Octopus....

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That's... not very SW in my opinion

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Also had a Spearton concept that I lost called Oceanacus... Never planned to make a suggestion of the Literal Spearton form of Poseidon, and probably won't

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O dam

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He had cool armor and a Trident... I definitely need to find the drawing

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This is the Standard Bearer (Who I plan on adding to the Holy Crusade Faction that this page is about)

The Not the Best drawing: THE KRAKEN RIDER!

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And here's the rest concept drawings I made: The Corsair, The Harpoon Gunner, and The Ironclad Warrior

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W-Where's the trident?

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The message above the Image doesn't go with the drawing the message below does, Oceanacus had the Trident and cool Armor (I made the Shoulder pads and ear area of the helmet look like waves, and had a drawing of him "Riding the Wave"

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ohhhh

niiice

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I'm pretty sure Oceanacus was my first attempt at drawing a General, I called him "Oceanacus, The Warlord of the High Seas"

Welp, I have to go to bed... It's 12 P.M. where I am at.

[upbeat plinth]

Aight

See ya

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dude the knights foot

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Damnnnnn who the [frick] keeps talking and deleting [stuff]

[forest wagon]

... I kept sending the messages in the wrong place so I deleted them after I noticed

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I knew it was you