Peak

[errant gust]

Im proud of it

[noble condor]

I'm not sure the design elements fit together. The anime style character with the realistic clouds. Also, I'm not sure about the choice of fonts.

[errant gust]

This is pretty much what i based the style off of and i made some of it up as i went

And went for extra style points yknow

The main character is a time traveler too

[noble condor]

I'm not really sure that style of graphic design really fits the layout you're creating though.

[errant gust]

Fair

[noble condor]

If I were trying to do this with that type of character art, I'd probably set it up a bit differently. This is just a quick example of a direction I might try... Not saying that you should or would want to do this but its an example of what I might do.

[errant gust]

Would it look better without the scattered words?

[errant gust]

WOAH this is incredible

Noted

[noble condor]

Just some ideas.

[noble condor]

You might want to start thinking about layout proportions, like Rule of Thirds. Investigate that a bit. In an RoT-based layout, a strong design element or focal point falls on one of the main control points in the layout. Also, that your layout has some notion of flow... For example, I force the character's face to be the most important thing in the design. Then it creates a path or trail for your eyes to follow, i.e. the reading the text...

[errant gust]

Ooo that makes a lot of sense actually

[bold harbor]

i’d move the guy in the middle a bit to the right but very nice