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#Writing Sample-1 [Right Now]
turbid stratus
elder void
A little confusing, but I think I understand what was going on. Is this a part of a bigger story or just a short story?
turbid stratus
its supposed to be a standalone
turbid stratus
A little confusing, but I think I understand what was going on. Is this a part o...
thank you for the input
i like things not being obvious
but if its not a comfy read, ill work on it
elder void
It's a little unsettling, dreamlike. But it's not stressful
turbid stratus
It's a little unsettling, dreamlike. But it's not stressful
there are some elements left for interpretation and unsettlement
but yeah, i need to provide more context
fervent ravine
One thing I’m very fond of in drama, and seems to be the case here, is taking a small, seemingly trivial moment, and making it feel epic. The part with the Post-It notes reads like this to me.
elder void
YES. the post it notes was pretty awesome!