#Outbreak: Four Humors typo

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marble marsh
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In the description for the Four Humors research, it says, "...a healthy body contains of a balance of four humors..."
The first "of" is not needed and it should just say, "...a healthy body contains a balance of four humors..."
Also, if you want to be very particular, where it says, "bile, black bile, blood and phlegm" an Oxford comma would be appropriate, so "bile, black bile, blood, and phlegm"

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If it's alright for me to just add to this, I found another typo. In The White Death research it states "unleases tuburculosis" instead of "unleashes tuberculosis"