Spelling and Grammar issues with Tea event | Cell to Singularity | Page 1

polar oriole · 2023-08-14T15:40:19.554Z

Here's a few I noticed 1. Helpful Traits - enzyme and antioxidant should be pluralized 2. Herbal Medicine - stimulant should be stimulating 3. Weight Management - Extra space between efforts and the period at the end of the sentence 4. Pruning - This reads better if the beginning is reworded like this: **Regular pruning tea plants helps...** 5. Drying - The article **a** should be between or and drying **or a drying** 6. Foam Art - Comma splice after the word Then. The sentences reads just fine with the comma **Then use brushes or other tools to manipulate the foam...** 7. Ice Tea - consistency. Both **Ice tea** and **Iced tea** are mentioned. I suggest sticking to one for consistency as both are acceptable.

polar oriole Aug 14, 2023, 3:40 PM

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Here's a few I noticed

Helpful Traits - enzyme and antioxidant should be pluralized
Herbal Medicine - stimulant should be stimulating
Weight Management - Extra space between efforts and the period at the end of the sentence
Pruning - This reads better if the beginning is reworded like this: Regular pruning tea plants helps...
Drying - The article a should be between or and drying or a drying
Foam Art - Comma splice after the word Then. The sentences reads just fine with the comma Then use brushes or other tools to manipulate the foam...
Ice Tea - consistency. Both Ice tea and Iced tea are mentioned. I suggest sticking to one for consistency as both are acceptable.