This is just nitpicking but it would be some nice polishing if it were to be added
1 Barn section idea
You begin inside the car and then press a button to leave it or an short cutscene plays instead of just instantly being out of the car(also side note actually have Quentin stuff from the intro be in the van would be nice)
2 the start of day 1
Instead of just teleporting out of bed straight into the game you can add an animation of Quentin standing up from the bed to make the transition from cutscene to gameplay feel smoother