Since it was said that the design isn't inherently final, I'll throw my hat into the ring with feedback.
Overall, the design of The Guest with the cloak is a wonderful design - however, I think that some minor adjustements could be potentially in order, such as changing his sleeves back to red and/or giving him his bag back somehow - though the bag feels less likely, so just changing the sleeves would do. Otherwise, though, I think the design is awesome!
#Some Thoughts On The Guest
cunning patrol
crude spindle
Addition
I think he should only wear the cloak when he's near the forrest protectors. like he's trying to blend in with them.
gilded dust
I agree i prefered his red sleeves over orange