I believe each area would benefit from having unique foliage and assets on and around them.
Ted's House: Ted is, according to the totally reliable (reference intended) HN wiki, "an unemployed and unhinged maniac". However, not much about his house screams that he is insane. I believe more needs to be added to his house in order to show the player that they are solving the mystery of a lunatic. Perhaps have bushes covering up the storm cellar door in the back, have tools, containers, and ladders scattered around his house, and have a pinboard in his study showing how much he spies on people.
The Bakery: I like the idea of her having decorative flower bushes, but I feel that there not only needs to be more colors for these bushes, but also more use of the potted plants.
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