#please add a deeper actual story

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dreamy summit
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The story we have right now is barely a story ik i sound very negative and i dont mean to be rude but you need to like actually make the story deeper if you know what i mean.

In alphas and the beta it seemed you were planning for a deeper story but in full game the story isnt deep at all its just you trying to rescue a kid and failing and thats it. Its clear you were planning for something deeper orignally and i think you should bring elements of your original idea back.

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Im sorry if i sound mean i dont mean anything mean

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Im just saying that the story is so thin right now

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please add a deeper actual story

dusty relic
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You need to express details on what you really want the story to be for the feedback, don't just tell them to make the story deeper or change it and that's it, you need to give some further details on how you want it to be, and how you want the plot to go

dreamy summit
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Ok

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Im gonna

dusty relic
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That'll work, I guess

dusky canopy
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the plot should revolve around the town, and the guest

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and ofc, Peterson

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right now the story is pointless

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kid gets kidnapped, you try to save kid, you save kid, but kid wants to go back to his father, and then you get knocked, you acheive nothig

dreamy summit
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they should focus more on the guest and the town then the neighbor

scarlet hill
dusky canopy
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ye that makes no sense either

gritty magnet
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Yeah I personally liked Alpha 1/1.5 of HN 2 more than the full game, same with the original Hello Neighbor Game, the alphas were better. Felt more like a horror game than a cartoon little kids game, but no hate, it was still fun.

dreamy summit
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There is no way the story can stay like this lol

dusky canopy
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HN never felt like a cartoon kids game

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to me

dreamy summit
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Heres some hello guest and early hello neighbor 2 concept arts you should really take inspiration from

dusky canopy
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no way crowman shelter real

dreamy summit
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Like ik

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They arent really story

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Releated but i just love the feel

shadow rock
dusty relic
safe citrus
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well he could be in the game

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but the way he is in the game rn doesnt make sense!

safe citrus
dreamy summit
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In the alphas and betas they really had something with the story

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I hope they decide to go back to it

dusky canopy
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they wont

dreamy summit
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Couse what they we’re planning was really good in my opinion and more interesting