The game should start by Quentin driving into town (like alpha 2) and once he reaches the office then he should start looking at clues to find the missing kids. (Aaron, Nicky and mya) so the next place he checks that night is of course Mr Petersons house. Once he goes there it plays an altered (full release) cutscene where instead of the bushes being the cat it should be Nicky and then he sees Mr Peterson taking Aaron then he crashes into the barn bla bla. Mr Peterson knocks him out. Then I think the 1st act should be breaking into Mr Peterson house and taking the camera back (read my comment for more detail)
#I got an idea on how to update the story.
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Once Quentin breaks into the basement (it should be a quick puzzle 1 lock) he takes back the camera (now broken of course) but still has the evidence he needs. He sees Aaron in the basement but once he takes Aaron out of the basement they see Myas grave which makes Aaron get terrified (or have trauma) and once Quentin try’s to comfort him Mr Peterson does the old prototype animation where it’s the black gloves grabbing quentins face from behind.
After that it should show a cutscene where Quentin wakes up he goes outside and sees Mr Peterson driving away (indicating that he knows where he lives)
But Mr Peterson forgot to take the pictures/evidence off of Quentin. Which Quentin shows to the police and that’s why the police are at Mr Petersons (because nobody is gonna believe Quentin or Nicky unless they had evidence like this) then this will start the first act with Nelson. (The police don’t want Quentin to be on the case anymore)