Just some feedback please :)

[rose gust]

Feedback on my doughnut

[ashen hearth]

makes me hungry

[steady vessel]

Hmm the shading is pretty flat

Idk if it's your style

But if I can give advice add more rendering and shading if not experiment with line work more

[charred scaffold]

Missing shine! Add a little white to the strawberries and frosting and it’ll make me drool lol.

[ashen hearth]

Alll the above and also I dont think angle of the dish matches the angle of the hand. looks more top down but the hands angle looks more to the side so it that makes it look awkward

Individually things look pretty good aside from the above mentioned ideas. But together the hand and donut dont look right imo

[rose gust]

Can u help me find a reference for a top angle waiter hand? I look on google and Pinterest but I found nothing 🙁

Like the top view of this

[rose gust]

This is what it looks like now

[charred scaffold]

Yesss! Looks great!

[rose gust]

I think some of the shines are a bit too big, let me know what u think 🙂

[charred scaffold]

So with shine or reflections, I’ve found they look more realistic the smaller you make them too. Looks great tho!

[rose gust]

Thanks!

I have made the shine a bit smaller

[charred scaffold]

Looks yummy

[ashen hearth]

Thats a tough one your going to have to sketch it out properly. Its not top down that angle is more like 3/4 down 60degrees ?
The good thing picturing it in my mind you actually would not see much of the fingers from that view mostly the wrist and arm would be showing

[ashen hearth]

This looks even more scrumptious

Yeah just put a wrist and arm there I dont think fingers would be visible at that angle only the lower part of the thumb that connects to the hand maybe?