#Critique Needed!!

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gilded thunder
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Hey so I’m a new member so pls forgive me if I’m doing something wrong. Anyways I have trouble with lighting the character’s face (she is leaning on the star) and it just slightly bothers me for some reason. This is just a wip so if you guys have any critique I will be open to it. Thank you.

indigo smelt
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i mean i think you already did a pretty good job with the lighting already, i guess the thing i could say is maybe accentuate the lighting a bit more with harsher shadows so theres a little bit more contrast so like play around with the values a bit more. especially around the hair so it looks like it has a bit more depth. hope this helped!!

tender laurel
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hello really lovely piece

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i feel like lighting ist problem here. maybe something that puts you of is a eye is a bit of? and in my opinion u can show a bit more of that lovel face,