please critique, im new to concept art

[obtuse lichen]

im trying to create a portfolio

[craggy blaze]

COMMIE!!!!!
-# /hj

[obtuse lichen]

What? Sorry i dont understand

[mystic sapphire]

The concept's cool but it's sort of hard to tell what it is exactly. Like in the first drawing- took me some time to figure out tht one of his hands was a scythe

Maybe try cleaning up the lines and do different line thicknesses for different parts, depending on how much u wana emphasize it

[craggy blaze]

Hammer & Sickle hands
thats a comunist

[obtuse lichen]

Thank you!

[obtuse lichen]

Aaah yeaa he is!