Any tips?

[brazen aspen]

This is my second time doing a drawing with a group of people, plz tell me if anything can be changed or fixed (I will colour it in)

[robust trail]

To be honest everyone looks alr. Its hard to tell apart individual characters but i think thats gonna change when you add color. Id probably say you can make tge person in the front's head just a bit smaller and maybe make their eyes a tini tiny bit smaller and bring them slightly down?? I suppose theit sticking out their tongue so thats alr. Besides that, cant wait to see it colored! Keep it up

[brazen aspen]

Tysm

[robust trail]

Also i just realized, this guys finger is very very long. If you want i can use red lines to help out making it look not so long? Besides that i actually like how u draw hands a lot

[robust trail]

Np

[brazen aspen]

Yes plz, that would be a great help 🙂

[robust trail]

ive tried my best, but more or less its not about the finger being too long. The index finger and the thumb they usually are perpendicular to each other. Sure its rounded, but its still a 90 degree angle. Also, from that perspective and pose, the other fingers wouldnt show, but the knuckles would. (i mean they could, but it depends on the pose)

Also id recommend you put both the index and the thumb in front of the chin in stead of them overlapping over. Personally ive got a mirror prompted up when i draw (including for this one) to help me with stuff like this, and id recommend you do too when youre unsure of a pose

Keep it up!

[brazen aspen]

Ok tysm

[severe heron]

I’m not an expert at art but i am a professional and the hand of the Purple eye girl is too long and the mouth is too close to the edge of the face so I would adjust it just a bit. THE ART IS SO CUTE THOUGH