Help me pleaseee

[scarlet wren]

(Spoiler there is ripped skin)
I need help I feel like something is off in this peace can someone tell me what it is?

[cloud spindle]

Horror art I do that too. The nose is less than a quarter of an inch from the mouth. I mean unless that was intentional. I’d say just move it closer to the eyes or get rid of it.

[scarlet wren]

Okay hold on!

Is this better? I also added more color and less harsh black lines

[scarlet wren]

I might just redo it because I don't think I did the best I could

[teal oar]

It looks good already I would say and as 2 mentioned that you can change the nose placement but as it's optional he said that too and as design choice it looks really good

The design does it job without any problem I would say in my opinion and overall as horror art it's really good

[scarlet wren]

Thank you! I'll try redoing it but hopefully it'll be even better!

[teal oar]

Sure it would be the more time we give to our art the better it gets

If you want to share and want any feedback you can tag me when you share or dm the artwork

[scarlet wren]

Okk!

[cloud spindle]

@teal oar I’d like to thank you for taking care of that.

[teal oar]

No need to thank man we're a community we should be helping each other

[naive jacinth]

Assuming the eyes are a strict design choice, you did well, everything looks great if youre simply aiming for a strong horror aspect

[scarlet wren]

It's okay I don't mind changing the eyes if that seems off to you

[naive jacinth]

To be honest with you it's really up to however you want it to look, it's your art therefore you can decide how you want it to be, don't take my opinion or other peoples if it looks right to you

But yes I would say that the eyes could be a little bigger, that is my sight of it though