#Any tips?

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real raptor
haughty anchor
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One eye a little misshapen and so is the jaw but seems pretty good

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Also try do draw the hair as simple shapes rather than singular strands

real raptor
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Yeah I’ve been working to fix the eye

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How’s this

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@haughty anchor

fathom kettle
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It's very nice but it seems the left eye is closer to the nose than the right

haughty anchor
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Let me give you a little outline to show u where I think it should be

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The top red line is how your eyes currently line up- as you can see, the right eye is significantly higher than the left

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Try making the angle of the upper lid of the right eye a little flatter

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To match the left

haughty anchor
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I just reshaped it a little bit, but I tried to give a little example of how it should be lowered/flattened

wide sedge
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it looks really nice my only gripe is that this bit of hair just looks off like shes got a bun on the side of her head

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but idk what exactly you were going for so maybe im just yappin