need help w the head proportions nd upper body anatomy

[sturdy kite]

the one on the right looks somewhat off... idk if it's bc of the head or body or smt else entirely (don't mind the unfinished hand)

annotations or other feedbacks on the drawing r appreciated!! :)

[autumn snow]

I think if you would fix the collar it would make it look as if the right shoulder of the person on the right look less droopy. That head tilt looks okay. Are you trying to make the boy on the left wrap his arm around his friend?

[sturdy kite]

ahh okok thanks! i'm a little bit confused on how i should fix the collar tho, could you clarify? thanks again!! and no, i'm not trying to make the guy on the left wrap his arm around the other guy

[autumn snow]

im cooking give me a minute

it looks kind of like a heart. All i did was erase the mistake. pretty easy fix.

you could make the shoulders mor flat but it looks okay shoulders do that.

[sturdy kite]

yooo thank you sm!! rlly appreciate it man :)

ill try making the shoulders a lil more flat cuz now that i think abt it, it looks kinda off like that

[autumn snow]

What can really help is outlining the outfit in a different color line art before you do a black line art lair. Two lairs one for figure out the anatomy and the design of the character. I seem to catch mistakes on the first layer. The second layer is the black line art and the colors. That’s how I do my art.

[craggy pumice]

Why hasnt anyone mentioned how the head s too short

[autumn snow]

How you figure that out I mean it’s a photo with only the chest area and above. It looks just fine to me.

[craggy pumice]

he, could say my eyes r trained

[autumn snow]

Oh no, no, no it ain’t going there. Putting words in my mouth aren’t you. Long faces and short faces you’ve seen anime and people like that before haven’t you? I mean I could’ve asked is there a reason the eyes are so skinny.

Why did I just say that

Misinterpreted what you said

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[craggy pumice]

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