#Trying to improve
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In my opinion overall it's really good quite balanced too just some things I found to point out it's little nit picking so the left hand of the character is on the other side of fire and as I can see it's mostly hidden behind the hoodie so instead of back side of left hand side bring the light on middle side or front you can say that'll make more sense as behind half of the hand will be behind hoodie and front side will be out on which the fire light will fall and now the other thing on the left side only near the left leg we see light and I don't there would be a light like that in near as most of the body will block it and the gaps will throw the light a farther side that's all I would say and I'm not a 2d artist I'm a 3d artist and aspiring director so if you feel my opinion isn't right then also it's fine I just say what I think from my perspective