Bulma improved

[odd gorge]

I spent some time working on anatomy and wondered if anyone can see something that is off?

One thing that I messed in the inking process was the folds in the cloth at the midsection.
I also realized the left leg is a little long.
Anything else? or overall balance opinions?

[sour crescent]

the thing that sticks out immediately to me is that her limbs arent bending where they should be bending
usually forearms and biceps are around the same length as each other. same with thighs and lower legs. breasts also dont work like that at all with fabric but thats just a personal pet peeve of mine

[winter raven]

IT ALR LOOKS SOOO MUCH BETTER GREAT IMPROVEMENT

When doing legs think about the ankle/foot thats also in shoes so that u can try and make the length of the leg proper cuz i think for this one ironically enough you could lower the knee a bit since the calf/shin seem long
The elbow could be lowered a bit as well which will also make it longer, u did sm better w the shoulder height id just lower the elbow so that the forearm and bicep are similar size as well

Besides that its fabric work, u have a lot of movement and lines in ur shirt and pants (makes ir look baggy) its actually more likely for it to be more of a straight line because gravity is always pulling on clothing, w few bigger wrinkles here and there

V proud of ur improvement alr good job /gen

[odd gorge]

Thanks for your kind words and feedback
I was working and various things and decide to have a crack at this pose again.
Will come back to it again after doing some study on the things you mentioned.

[odd gorge]

Thanks for the feedback!! yes the folds are awkward but I was trying to emphasize a bit that the shirt is oversized for her breast size lol. Even if its a bit unrealistic.

[sour crescent]

oversized would actually have the adverse effect
it would flow off her chest and look looser
undersized would cause kore creases and crinkkes by wrapping itself around her body