By skill level I would say you're intermediate to advanced leaning more on advanced side but as a first page of the comic it's a little cluttered and confusing for the audience to understand
#My comics First page
spare jewel
Like you have added that small square boxes in above rectangle now how do you want the audience to read zig zag or left to right
The other two larger panels are good but I would say start the comic with a little attention grabbing page and after some chapters you can add this kind of thing as the one who's interested in your comic will put efforts to know about it read it but someone who's starting and the panels are hard for the audience to start they are more likely to switch up you know the attention span is very less of people out there
proper mural
Personally I'd say the panel are ever confusing idk where to start there are supposed to flow with the pages like I also recommend checking out a book called:framed perspective and understand comics by scott it's useful so get a feel
