Feedback on this cartoonish / Omori styled face?

[cosmic nova]

Honestly, it looks pretty good! I’m not much of a color person so i wont say much about that, but i will give some tips. One thing is that the eyes should be about 1 eye length apart from eachother. You should be able to fit one eye inbetween them to make them look better. I would also recommend to push the eyebrows closer to eachother since eyebrows are supposed to be a bit longer than the eye width. Hope this was helpful to you!

[zinc trout]

It looks great, i would say to shorten the face a bit (chin area)

[tulip granite]

it's very pretty, maybe you could make the lineart a lil bit thicker if you want omori style 🙂