I know my drawing isn't very good...but...

[chrome pine]

I spent over an hour redrawing it, but I still don't know where I went wrong
I wanted to draw him a little cooler...

[open tapir]

he's already cool for me!

[chrome pine]

Really?

[open tapir]

Ye

Or u want a colder vibe 🤨

[chrome pine]

Yep

Well, my character is a mafia, so… I think he needs to look colder

[open tapir]

Ohhh I see

Too cute for a mafia, huh?

[chrome pine]

Yep

To me, he feels rather soft, and the more I try to refine him, the more tangled everything becomes

[open tapir]

💥

Dropped some references pic ( I'm not sure if u will use em but heh )
Anyways for me, I would like to sharpen his eye ( or making his eyebrow lower )
Then maybe adding more earrings cuz he's a mafia

[chrome pine]

Let me try it

[chrome pine]

Uh… sorry, I was worried I might ruin the drawing, so I tried drawing it on my phone instead. I feel like it’s not very good though…

[open tapir]

Tbh I'm glad that u used phone to draw it first (imagine accidentally ruining it just to realise u have to turning it back)

But well girl
Idk if I've other solution

Maybe Ethan could be a cute mafia

[chrome pine]

Bro, he’s the boss of a mafia gang

[open tapir]

holy moly

[chrome pine]

[open tapir]

Ethan I deeply apologize to u—

[chrome pine]

Maybe Ethan is the most unfortunate character on Earth, about to turn into a ‘cute mafia boss.’

[chrome pine]

Maybe… his face looks too soft? I’ll try to adjust it and make his features a bit sharper. That might work better

I take back what I said earlier... I was wrong..Now it looks more like a plaster sculpture than a person…

[vital falcon]

Maybe add some light shadows where the cheekbones are and make the chin a bit more rounded?

And I also think that maybe lift the iris a little bit higher so you can see like the bottom of the iris?

[chrome pine]

Let me try