Any advice i will take

[lyric hedge]

i need any advice on my art just in gen i accept critique too

[mellow bear]

Use " add" blending mode for harsh lighted areas and "multiply" for dark areas

But don't over use them ❤

[lyric hedge]

thank you!

[viral fable]

try adding some depth through the color of your shading. as you get into darker areas of the face try shifting hues a little bit too. obviously you don’t have to do this but i find it adds a little more intrigue

[lyric hedge]

thanks ill try!

[mellow bear]

𝚈𝚠𝚠

[pure bone]

The nose is a little short

[pure bone]

I rounded out the face a little, and I added harder highlights and shadows

And I added more volume to the ponytail

The rest of the hair could also probably use more volume but I didn’t think abt it

@lyric hedge I hope this helps :)

[lyric hedge]

ah her ponytail is suppose to be smaller cause her hair is less

[lyric hedge]

yes thank youu

[pure bone]

Ahh, I see

[mellow bear]

𝚃𝚑𝚒𝚜 𝚒𝚜 𝚜𝚘𝚘 𝚙𝚛𝚎𝚌𝚒𝚘𝚞𝚜 𝚒𝚖𝚘!!

[exotic cliff]

there are some oddities with her hand. like, either the pinky on her left, your right hand is too big, or that is the ring finger i'm seeing and her actual pinky is missing.
it is an extremely hard hand pose to draw even for experts, so i'd say follow a ref closely

also take a look at the hand on her shoulder

[pure bone]

Idk, I didn’t bother messing with the hands because I draw very cartoony hands

I didn’t think I’d be much help

lol

[exotic cliff]

woops sorry about that, thought you were op

[exotic cliff]

@lyric hedge

[lyric hedge]

ah the problem was i used my own hands cause i could fine any refs like this so thanks ill keep it in mind because this was a redraw of a drawing i did

[pure bone]

lol

[mellow bear]

𝙸𝚍𝚔 𝚒𝚏 𝚝𝚑𝚒𝚜 𝚠𝚒𝚕𝚕 𝚋𝚎 𝚜𝚘𝚖𝚎𝚝𝚑𝚒𝚗𝚐 𝚜𝚝𝚞𝚙𝚒𝚍 𝚏𝚘𝚛 𝚖𝚎 𝚝𝚘 𝚜𝚊𝚢 𝚋𝚞𝚝 𝙸 𝚝𝚑𝚒𝚗𝚔 𝚢𝚘𝚞 𝚜𝚑𝚘𝚞𝚕𝚍 𝚊𝚍𝚍 𝚏𝚘𝚕𝚍𝚜 𝚊𝚛𝚘𝚞𝚗𝚍 𝚝𝚑𝚎 𝚊𝚛𝚖 𝚙𝚒𝚝 𝚜𝚒𝚗𝚌𝚎 𝚊 𝚕𝚘𝚝 𝚘𝚏 𝚝𝚎𝚗𝚜𝚒𝚘𝚗 𝚒𝚜 𝚐𝚘𝚒𝚗𝚐 𝚝𝚑𝚎𝚛𝚎 𝚒𝚖 𝚊𝚜𝚜𝚞𝚖𝚒𝚗𝚐