Crit😖

[ivory wagon]

I hate my life so why not get some more criticism from you lovely ppl!!

[violet mantle]

lmao

super good drawing

only criticism is maybe left lady's neck is a little bit too far forward? unless she's supposed to be pulling her head back, and if so, maybe like have her head look more actually drawn in (with skin creases, less defined jawline, maybe tilting head a bit forward)

and the shading could be a bit more, like, defined, i suppose

but otherwise fire as hell