Thoughts about anatomy

[pulsar sandal]

I'm satisfied with the overall result of the sketch, but I'm unsure if the anatomy or the way the clothing is right now is correct, any thoughts?

this is the reference ^

also the hyper realistic eye is a placeholder

[still rain]

Oof her shoulder looks rough, maybe angle the arm more downwards, keeping the hand at its current position and move mouth nose and eyes more upwards 😋😋
The hair is sick, but maybe move the starting of the bangs more forward, since she is looking downwards and move the hat a lil forward so tht it sits on the start of the bangs 😝😝
Amazing job on the clothes, it's turning out pretty sick