Need feedback

[vapid perch]

in my unprofessional opinion:
the lower half of the front leg looks short, but I don't know what angle you're going for;
the hips/bottom and the X on the shirt seem camera-facing rather than forward-(on the body)-facing;
but all in all, a beautiful sketch with wonderful detail and a well-done face and hair.

[flat olive]

hey to show full or half body 🙂
but i like it