Any advice or tips to improve it?

[supple kernel]

Hmm lemme think

The perspective on the body looks a bit off bc it's smushed a bit

Here lemme show you what I mean

[scenic cargo]

oh the thighs? i just fixed that, it was a rough sketch or did u meant smth else?

[supple kernel]

Mm not really the thighs, just the actual torso

Looks flattened

And the mouth and nose are a bit too high up

Heres what I mean; how it would look if it was a bit more accurate to the perspective (im sorry I don't know how else to explain it ToT)

(I didn't do the legs bc reasons)

(also ik it kind of looks like her chest is bigger than the original, it only looks like that bc I wasn't very descisive on which lines to darker; my apologies)

[scenic cargo]

LMAO U DREW IT

[scenic cargo]

tbh i get it

yeah i can kinda see how the nose are high up

[supple kernel]

Alrighty 👍

[supple kernel]

I only redrew the torso and mouth 🥀🥀