hi anatomy help pls!!!

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pls god help me this anatomy for him is so off but idk what is and i’ve been editing it for like an hour and can’t figure it out, the og paper sketch is here too i suck at drawing guys ugh

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Flip the canvas

Take a pic and flip it

(coming from an experienced artist)

It'll help you discern what's off when you can't tell just by looking at it

Okay I just looked over it and there are just a few things that need some improvement

The red is marking the parts that could be improved; the green is the correct proportion

-Head on the guy is too small
-eye level on the girl is slightly angled incorrectly
-the guys arms is too long

(also naturally I am rather blunt with communication, so if I sound harsh/rude, I don't mean it that way)

(I mean to give good honest critique)

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no no i rlly appreciate it!

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Alright

You're doing a really good job so far

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thanks!

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You're very welcome

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is this looking any better i tweaked a bit

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Gonna be real art is just so freakin difficult, pursuing it is impressive on its own

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Oh yes definitely

Id say the issue that sticks out to me the most is the guys arm tbh

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the perspective is just what keeps messing me up

yeaaaah

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Mhmm

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lemme mess with it some more i’ll brb!

thank you again for all ur help so far! ^^

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Ofc! No problem, I like helping other artists

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ok i tweaked some more

i think maybe the shoulder needs to be moved back?

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Whoaa holy cow

That's a lot of improvement

Id say the shoulder is fine

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alrighty! thank you again! :3

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You're welcome!! Anytime ^^