There's something wrong with this drawing but I don't know what

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you're trying to go with a semi realistic shading but the facial details are stylized into more cartoon/anime/non realistic style so you have 2 styles on the same character which makes the drawing look off

the eyelids are also flipped, the top of the curve should be 1/3rd of the eye towards the center, you did 1/3rd of the eye towards the edge

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for this to feel "better" you either need to add shadows on the face like you did for the clothes or keep it all line art like the nose

basically pick one render type

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os olhos se reparares bem um tá mais para cima que o outro