#would like some advice on how to make this look better

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peak storm
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A friend suggested I create art around the theme of "overprotectiveness," but I’m not sure if I’ve captured that well here. It doesn’t quite feel like it matches the theme, and something about it feels a bit off. I finished it in about an hour using oil pastels for the background and ballpoint pen for the girl in the center. Any advice on how to improve or rework it to better convey the theme would be really appreciated!

rocky ermine
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That’s great personally I think it captures the theme