critique my piece

[charred lagoon]

This is my latest piece, im already done w/ it but im curious to know if there was anything i couldve done better

[pale marsh]

u need to darken the background more

also try a few diff angels with ure lightning

[charred lagoon]

cant rly change it now that ive already finished it

[charred lagoon]

but wdym darken the background and try different angles w the lighting

[pale marsh]

a background is supppose to strengthen the main point

its taking over now rather then blending in our enchant it

it also doesn´t vibe right

like it doesn´t mathc the vibes of the char our contradicts it

[charred lagoon]

ya ig so

[charred lagoon]

wel those two are related

its from a series

[charred lagoon]

but like i see

ill implement that the next time i do a dark background

[pale marsh]

yea ik

[charred lagoon]

oh well alr then

[summer coral]

Omg I love Dandadan!! But if you want some advice, I would do something to make the background and character a little more distinct from each other. I’m not sure but the Evil Eye looks a little off compared to the bg

[charred lagoon]

dandadans peak fr

but like yeah i see

guess so

if i ever do something similar, ill try applying it there