freehand sketch

[stone sail]

I just recently got an apple pencil and have been trying my best, any constructive criticism welcome. i’m honestly proud of myself this is the first sketch ive done where im proud

[hard sundial]

can I be honest? 😭

[stone sail]

absolutely, i’ve only just started so please share opinions !!

[stone sail]

i changed it a little

[hard sundial]

the first image kinda looked like a neanderthal 😭

[sick timber]

ayy she said constructive critic my friend

its a great start!

learn some structural fundamentals. how face proportions work etc
also don't bother with so many scratchy lines for the hair. it will make your paintings look messy 🙂
i wouldn't draw the full outline of the lips. it always looks a bit strange. try to refine everything with adding shadows.

ah and always flip the canvas to notice your mistakes ! 😄

[stone sail]

thankyou! i appreciate this so much!!