Beautiful art! As for the background, I think there is indeed a void on the left side, which draws the viewer's attention. I would suggest slightly blurring the background to highlight the girl more. Additionally, the girl's color tone blends in with the surroundings, so I would darken the background. The eyes stand out from the color palette of the drawing, and they should be less vibrant. Overall, I think you've done a great job, and this is already a great drawing!
#Eyes and Background
covert chasm
proven sluice
Very well done so far! I’m not an expert on eyes so I’ll help with the background instead. Maybe make the wall darker or my personal opinion is add some stickers or make it a different color. The clothing is peak though. And the bed too! Amazing drawing.
tropic compass
first off love ly job on the usage of rule of thirds
secondly it needs contrast
her light skin and uniform is fighting for attention with the wall and the bed sheets
you also need deeper shadows, the shading in the character feels flat
like i said more shadows i just used a tone curve on the illusteation and you can see how the character feels lost and we cant really see her that much but with contrast it would be easy to didtinguish between her and the environemt cause i realise you also wanted the bags to be a point of reference also
tropic compass
did a little tweak and now you can see what @proven sluice meant with the wall being darker
shes now so bright that she will be the first thing a viewer lok at when they look at this image
and then the bags
great job
tried using thesame curves on my tweaking and you can noe see ttheres a different between her and the sheets and her sillhouette is more pronounced
and if you are in doubt about your proportions just flip your canvas you ll see the mistakes