#Looking for critique n some comments!

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flint sigil
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I have looked at this for a little to long and I wanna now what‘s wrong- or if something is wrong - proportions, colors, contrast etc! Redlines and also overwork very welcome!

and then i‘m also looking for fun comments like what name would you give her, what type of personality she has n stuff! i wanna know if I captured her spirit well 🙂

lucid thorn
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She reminds me of Annie Leonhart CAT

plain steeple
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I'm assuming that she gets into fights from the scar on her lip. With her face, her nose is crooked, but I feel that might indicate breaking it in the past. What makes it look off, is that the mouth lines up with the crooked nose and not the perspective of her chin. I hope that makes sense. I can do a small edit to show what I mean if you'd like?

flint sigil
flint sigil
plain steeple
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I nudged her chin, ear, top of the head and mouth. I hope this helps at least a little. Sorry if it strayed too far from what you're going for. I tried to keep it true to your style

flint sigil