#Help about drawing

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dusky kraken
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So there is my drawing (oc) I bet rhere is a lot of mistakes but..could anyone help me and critique?

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I also want to change nose (to a different nose shape)

shrewd notch
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your drawing looks pretty good and i like your style! if you want my suggestions:

  1. the wind warps his hair an awful lot, i would recommend making minimal strands be affected by the winds because otherwise the hair looks a bit off-centered
  2. he seems to be facing slightly leftward but that's not reflected in the mouth shape(shapes change when you look at it from a different angle)
  3. i would recommend studying wing anatomy because they are a bit more complicated than one would assume
    hope this helps!
dusky kraken
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Ahh thank you

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Ill try!!

dusky kraken
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@shrewd notch ı tried to fix the hair a bit

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Can i show?

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I think its still bad but..

shrewd notch
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yes go for it!

dusky kraken
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@shrewd notch

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Hii

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Sorry

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I did a lot of changes

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